Which Free Custom will we make

[EvangelinevonWinter]

I asked everyone to come up with a storyline that we can shoot to give you all as a free custom. We only got three suggestions so I am going to ask you guys to vote on which one gets made.


UFO alien abduction switch By Kings Narf
Broken Sleeper By Dale Coba
Hot for teacher 2 by jknight_2000


If you need to read the simple plot ideas check out the suggestions here:
http://www.fembotcentral.com/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=10909

[King Snarf]

I don't know who this King's Narf fellow is, but I like the cut of his jib!

[EvangelinevonWinter]

I don't know who this King's Narf fellow is, but I like the cut of his jib!

lol the joys of cut and paste mishaps.

[bilbo]

My choice (Broken Sleeper) was based on 2 points.
A. Story that workes for me
B. Ability for the story to be filmed

[dale coba]

Those stories not selected for the free custom are likely to be used in someone's future productions.

With stories where a technician visits a sleeper with a broken bot, I like the range of attitudes which the sleeper can display. What matters is that she is self-absorbed, but she can be afraid of punishment, or spoiled rich; she can treat the bot as an object, or have feelings for her like for a houseplant, a restored vintage car, or a pet, or... leaky faucet?

Here, the sleeper is only talking about herself, so her mixture of concern for and objectification of herself could be really stark, and patently un-human. Throw in a green-screen view of her inner workings, and that's all the proof you'd ever need.

- Dale Coba
(hope that's not too much lobbying. i've placed my vote, and one post to comment)

[EvangelinevonWinter]

Well....are you three willing to write a script for us?
I might as well just make all three and give one out quarterly.

[dale coba]

Well....are you three willing to write a script for us?
I might as well just make all three and give one out quarterly.

I'd consider it a personal dereliction of duty, not to try my best.

However, if some of those who voted for my B.S. would step up to help shape the script with me, I think it would have a better chance at being a better product. My record is littered with failures , and big plans washed away when interrupted by depression or other health problems. I'm too neurotic to work on important projects without advice, assistance, or a safety net.

Trying to be enthusiastic and realistic,
- Dale Coba

EDIT: [Cancelled, due to a lack of cooperation]

[jknight_2000]

Wow, to be totally honest - while I like my own script idea .... I actually like Dale's better than mine - it would take the genre in another direction not really done by many. Any assistance I can provide to winning script, I will offer.

Humbled and will to help
JKnight2K

[dale coba]

Let's call her "Alyssa"or "Clarissa" ... (or some name that sounds like "Narcissus").

Before the on-screen action starts,

Too heartily she had masturbated and role-played in front of a mirror, objectifying herself with deep lust. She fell in love with her reflection. When she over-heated, her identity forked into two processes.

Alyssa was now sure she owned an Alyssa-bot that looked like her, and that she had named after herself. For the bot to be a true bot, in Alyssa's eyes, the bot needed an owner.

So Alyssa elevated her own status to human - a deep-deep sleeper - now she thinks she's human. She can brush off any suggestion that she's a robot without a fuss. However, the bot won't respond to Alyssa's voice commands - bots don't take orders from bots.

That's when the script starts, with Alyssa calling for a technician.
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He arrives, they talk about her, the bot, the problem.
She leads him to the closet mirror - now the viewer understands, and re-evaluates what it means, that there has only ever been the one Alyssa-bot, and no Alyssa.
He gives "Alyssa" a seat where she can "watch him work on the Alyssa-bot", and repairs her.

The final confirmation software runs a virtual scenario "in Alyssa's head", in which she performs sexually with/for the technician. She demonstrates being Alyssa, being a bot, knowing what went wrong, and what the technician has fixed so this won't happen again.

With the virtual test concept, we get to see the fembot sexiness; but the actual relationship between Alyssa's body and her owner hasn't been sullied by the technician.

- Dale Coba, stirring the pot

[EvangelinevonWinter]

When you have the time write it up and send it to me at:
[email protected]
or at:
[email protected]

Make it as detailed as your stories including what you want us to say.
The two most important things for fembot customs are the sounds and the lines. If the dialog isn't believable it spoils the whole thing. as well as the sound fx. if its over the top or too much or not enough it brings you out of it.