Sara - The Return

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Sara - The Return

Post by saradroidgirl » Thu Aug 02, 2012 5:14 am

Well, I promised I'd try to get into stories again. It's been over 10 years since I last wrote the original Sara stories, and I'm a lil bit rusty ;) but hope you enjoy.

I've posted it over on fembotwiki as I preferred not to split it over a few posts.

Sara - The Return

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Re: Sara - The Return

Post by Korby » Thu Aug 02, 2012 12:35 pm

A very welcome surprise! Glad to see you back at it!
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Re: Sara - The Return

Post by saradroidgirl » Thu Aug 02, 2012 1:04 pm

Thanks Kishin and Korby - two of my all-time favourite people in the whole world of ASFR 8)

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Re: Sara - The Return

Post by DollSpace » Thu Aug 02, 2012 3:05 pm

I liked this story; plus, I enjoy reading most stories where gynoids have red hair :) but anyway, it was short and sweet, to the point, and accomplishes what it set out to do, though I'd like to see more development of Sara's personality, cos of course in my head I have a whole story mapped out where her boss keeps taking her home and eventually doesn't want her to leave and she starts getting curious about other things and develop new connections and thoughts in her mind, but that's probably not where you intended to go with this story lol.

Good to see you back, too :)

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Post by LongTimeLurker » Thu Aug 02, 2012 4:58 pm

I enjoyed that!

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Re: Sara - The Return

Post by Trace Venom » Fri Aug 03, 2012 10:29 am

Killer- Welcome Back!

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Re: Sara - The Return

Post by A.N.N. » Sat Aug 04, 2012 11:31 pm

Very nice. Thanks for sharing :D
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Re: Sara - The Return

Post by mtm12 » Sun Aug 05, 2012 3:55 pm

I really liked your new Sara story, but I have a question regarding continuity. Does the new story come before all the other stories or is there no internal continuity connecting all the stories? The reason I ask is that in this new story Essjay is relying on a tech service and in the very first Sara story, Essjay is very knowledgable with computers and robotics and has his very own home lab.

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Re: Sara - The Return

Post by sparty » Sun Aug 05, 2012 4:46 pm

welcome back - one of my favorite writers

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Re: Sara - The Return

Post by saradroidgirl » Tue Aug 07, 2012 11:55 am

mtm12 wrote:I really liked your new Sara story, but I have a question regarding continuity. Does the new story come before all the other stories or is there no internal continuity connecting all the stories? The reason I ask is that in this new story Essjay is relying on a tech service and in the very first Sara story, Essjay is very knowledgable with computers and robotics and has his very own home lab.
There's no continuity to be honest, especially given the 13 years its taken to do another one :lol:

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Re: Sara - The Return

Post by saradroidgirl » Tue Aug 07, 2012 12:07 pm

DollSpace wrote: but anyway, it was short and sweet, to the point, and accomplishes what it set out to do, though I'd like to see more development of Sara's personality, cos of course in my head I have a whole story mapped out where her boss keeps taking her home and eventually doesn't want her to leave and she starts getting curious about other things and develop new connections and thoughts in her mind, but that's probably not where you intended to go with this story lol.
It's a nice idea actually, which I have thought about. They tend to be succinct because I'm usually lacking the time and/or patience to really develop a story/set of stories fully (and do it justice). Praps one day (although feel free to do so yourself, she says throwing down the gauntlet ;) :) )

Thanks everyone :D

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Re: Sara - The Return

Post by DollSpace » Thu Aug 09, 2012 9:18 am

saradroidgirl wrote:
DollSpace wrote: but anyway, it was short and sweet, to the point, and accomplishes what it set out to do, though I'd like to see more development of Sara's personality, cos of course in my head I have a whole story mapped out where her boss keeps taking her home and eventually doesn't want her to leave and she starts getting curious about other things and develop new connections and thoughts in her mind, but that's probably not where you intended to go with this story lol.
It's a nice idea actually, which I have thought about. They tend to be succinct because I'm usually lacking the time and/or patience to really develop a story/set of stories fully (and do it justice). Praps one day (although feel free to do so yourself, she says throwing down the gauntlet ;) :) )

Thanks everyone :D
I may have a go at it after I finish what I'm working on now, even if someone else does it first. Thanks!

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