Mean "Girls" - a sketchy outline of a fine story idea

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Mean "Girls" - a sketchy outline of a fine story idea

Post by dale coba » Sun Oct 09, 2011 4:06 pm

At least, I think there's some fun to be had, with this simple premise.
I'm no writer, so I toss this out to you all, half-formed;
it's better than keeping it to myself, until it's finished and polished ('cause that'll never happen).

With multiple producers needing ideas, we have an opportunity to brainstorm and help out.
Please, add any thoughts, suggestions.

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Mean Girls: A sleeper tells her owner about an encounter with mean girls, who taunted her and told her she isn't real.

She's perky, but pouty and troubled.

She ran into Mean Girls, at the Salon <repair shop>,
and they messed with her "mind".

"She said, 'Let's play a game - upgrade and reprogram'"

The details came out in conversation (girl gets progressively more aroused)

Flashback: They told her that she's not real, that she was real once,
but her Owner chose her,
and without her knowledge, had her automated,
and programmed to be unable to know that she was a machine.

she: "I told her I was a good girl, a perfect girl, a flawless girl,"
so She shouldn't be so mean

she: "She said, she could see my seams.
I think she meant my birthmarks?

she: The masseuse <technician> was working on my leg,
and She took it and shoved it into my face,
but I didn't understand what she meant.

he: Don't worry, not true.

she: I know I'm not a robot - could a robot do this? or this? or <cock in throat talking>

she: Then, I thought She was going to claw my face off,
but instead she showed me a mask of my own face,
then flipped it over,
and on the other side there was all this tiny, sparkling jewelry,
like tinsel and colored lights on a Christmas tree.

he: Kinda like circuitry?

she: I guess.

<he: sympathy, a little tech concern (as if for the hardware, and the suggestion in her "head" that she was just turned into a robot now)>

he: You look very horny today.
Even more than usual.

she: I didn't want to, but all that time I fantasized that She was eating out my pussy.

<By the end of her tale and his questioning, she has become so neurotic and aroused, that she is furiously masturbating and malfunctioning.>

he attends to her panel
she's calm and mildly puzzled

he: Where did this collar/necklace come from?
Oh, I see. There's a QR barcode on the back.
"Read this for me, baby."

<she doesn't get that she shouldn't be able to read a barcode>

"Congratulations on your latest conquest.
She's one smoking hot babe.
I thought my girls and this electronic jammer necklace might make for some fun.
Of course, you can blank her back - but I find that when a woman half-remembers what she was built for, the fucking is even better. - <rival>"

he: "no of course you're not a robot.
the mean girls tricked you into wearing this necklace,
and combined with their teasing it made you hallucinate these things.
now that you're free of it, you'll soon forget all about these silly little thoughts."

she: oh. but what should I do?

he: the next time you see those girls, you tell them....
not to be so mean to you.

she: but what about being a robot?

he:...and be sure to put a nanite colony on each of them.
They won't change their tune immediately,
but the next time you see them I think you'll appreciate the changes.
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he: still, that robot idea is kinda sexy
she - eager to please, eagerly plays robot for sex.

<actually a porn starlet, playing a robot playing a human playing a robot>

he: whatever you were before, you're an AVN award-winning porn star robot now.
Say hello to your adoring fans

he: <she> now available to order
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Re: Mean "Girls" - a sketchy outline of a fine story idea

Post by gynoneko » Fri Oct 14, 2011 12:37 am

Still needs some development, but it is an interesting idea. The sleeper doesn't realize she is a robot, and her programming is making it very hard for her to accept it, so his bad explanations totally convince her... at least that's how I got it. Is this meant to be a story, a video, or what?
Still, with some more work, it could be quite fun!
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Re: Mean "Girls" - a sketchy outline of a fine story idea

Post by dale coba » Fri Oct 14, 2011 5:45 am

Could be a video, could be a story... in more talented hands than mine.
It's a plot easily placed in a Hypnolust or other video.

I'm thinking of non-conscious fembots, whose programming structure doesn't mean that all details must be integrated together.
Learning is what biological systems do.
Mine effectively have mental filters, and can not see or hear what they are programmed not to.
A core process manages the vast collection of possible responses, like a writers' room offering up lines to a live show.
Not like a mind reaching out for facts.

These fembots don't generally need to be convinced, and accept completely illogical ideas, if told to.
More Cherry 2000, than Jessica Jaymes in Brazzers "I am not a Robot" #1.

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Re: Mean "Girls" - a sketchy outline of a fine story idea

Post by dale coba » Fri Oct 14, 2011 6:07 am

I'd also like the idea of a fembot who speaks her thoughts without realizing it,
AND doesn't/can't figure out that anyone can hear her thoughts.

When I say "thoughts", that can just be the neurotic, dirty talk-babble of a simple robot mind:
  • "I'm a good girl, a very good girl. Good girls are good at obeying, and pleasure, and I'm more beautiful because I can suck and fuck like a good bunny-slut. I know I'm not a robot, because real girls are the prettiest, and I can take his cock all the way deep in my throat, and still talk dirty to Master."
The thoughts don't need to make sense, but reflect the drives she's been programmed to follow. The rambling is for our benefit.
Unconsciously, she's very sexy this way; like a character with swaying hips and a baby-doll voice that has no idea of how actively attractive her unavoidable traits are to others.

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