Mechas Heart

[T-elos/Thurosis]

Hi guys,

i hope you guys enjoy this short sidetrack story as well as all of my other stuff on my Gallery at DA http://thurosis.deviantart.com XD

I do not know how many of you knows about my current remake of Mechas Heart...
But too make that Manga i had to started to write the story as well... and sometimes also get side tracked...

So here is a short side-story of Mechas Heart:

Mechas Heart - An unwelcomed Guest -

It is in middle of the night, Yoshitaka is maintaining Miaka as he ever do. Even if his Villa is well secured. Nobody have realized that someone has intruded this Villa.
That Intruder found his lab in the cellar after few minutes since he heard the sound of a screwdriver coming from that direction. He saw Yoshitaka decided to sneak behind him.
Second later he stroke him down with one hit with an baseball bat...
The guy who attacked Yoshitaka suddenly find a remote control. Miaka woke up from her standby mode because she got an unwell feeling about her master Yoshitaka and soon it turned out to be real... one of her worst "nightmare" became true... She saw Yoshitaka without conciousness with a bloody head on the floor. The intruder realized immediatly that Miaka have to be an android so he pressed several button the remote control.
Miaka try to resist it but it was useless... Her robotic body had to obey. The guy pressed several buttons and Miaka became a marionette. That guy with the remote control took over the voice control over Miaka so he ordered her to go upstairs to find a room with a bed... So she did. He ordered her to take off her clothings, so she did. He orderd her to lay on the bed and spread her legs, and without any control over her own body she do this as well... The guy took off this mask and Miaka realized that is person is Velaris... [to be continued]




Several things about the short story above:

- In my remake of Mechas Heart i had to rename Thurosis into "Yoshitaka" because it would be strange or rather sucks if everybody in that story call one of the maincharacters by an nickname =P
- Velaris is the antagonist of Yoshitaka.

[Asato]

Not a fan of rape stories

[--NightBattery--]

don't worry asato, i think thurosis is the kind of guy that don't let the bad guy win,...in the big run.

[T-elos/Thurosis]

don't worry asato, i think thurosis is the kind of guy that don't let the bad guy win,...in the big run.

lol haha thanks, but who knows... every single person on this world have some"madness" inside them, just depends from the amount of madness...
and i'm aware that i've a huge amount of it inside my tiny head

[Asato]

I just generally don't like gratuitous rape scenes.

[T-elos/Thurosis]

I just generally don't like gratuitous rape scenes.

yeah i know this already
so what do you want?

[Asato]

I just generally don't like gratuitous rape scenes.

yeah i know this already
so what do you want?

Well here's my intro post http://www.fembotcentral.com/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=9126

[--NightBattery--]

mmmh... i should had made an intro post too U_U

[T-elos/Thurosis]

I just generally don't like gratuitous rape scenes.

yeah i know this already
so what do you want?

Well here's my intro post http://www.fembotcentral.com/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=9126

Haha! That's a great posting there! =)
And I do not disagree with you. Maybe i'm the more strange... because I do like both... gynoids beings slaves or as a more intelligent being than we humans.
Why? Simple, it just plain comfortable etc. on the other hand i do not mind if they become "greater beings" than we humans are.
Having a robotic partner which can understand human emotions (or even more) could solve many problems too. (i'm aware of the negative side-effects of robots with human emotions)

either way...

after i've read your link/post, i'm sure you will like my Mechas Heart story (not that above), because currently i'm drawing a story about those stuff

[Asato]

Well I am a fan of your deviantart work

[Saya]

Honestly? Sexual rape does sort of get me a bit squeamish, yet forceful reprogramming and such I do not mind. Such an odd contrast, I suppose.

Anyway, always good to see more of your work. You are steadily improving with each drawing you make, Thurosis.

[T-elos/Thurosis]

hi everybody,

here is the next part of my side tracked story of - An unwelcomed Guest -

Miaka remembered his face and what he had done to her in her past.
Few years ago when Miaka had gone to Yoshitaka school to pick him up and take him home, her sensors sensed many times that somebody is following her. She also remembered how the young Velaris tried several times to hack in her system over her wireless connection system, but also how he failed everytime. Even if she could report all those illegal doings, she never did it because she thought that these were nothing more than childish pranks... but now it is something else and she felt something like "regreting" that she hadn't done anything back then to prevent his Lust for androids.

She tried despairedly to get her control back over her body but nothing have changed.
The unwelcomed guest enjoyed and continued having fun with this female marionette. He did this sexplay very roughly and with brute force on purpose... only to break her.
So as rougher he became the more reddish Miakas vision wents. Many Error messages were running through her A.I. was in total chaos. She sensed how every single circuit inside her body starts to overheat and starts to short circuit.
Velaris slowly got bored so to find more thrill he started to tear Miakas body apart. First he tore one of her arm... then one of her legs... Miaka body sparks and her A.I can't handle much more damages.
Her body is malfunctioning and her body parts twitching on the bed. battery and hydrolic fluids are coming out of her body.
For the first time Miaka felt something unusual. She wants that this madness ends immediatly and one and only solution which she had was to go against her own programming. To be exact to break her basic programming and the three laws of robotic. even if she could to speak up she could calculate a probability of at least 95% that Velaris won't listen to her. Miaka A.I pushed her processor unit at maximun and more errors came inside her nearly collapsing A.I. and vision but like a miracke Miaka could move her left arm.
She tried to grab Velaris throat but her sub-security-system whch only exists to prevent malfunctioning robots to harm human beings slows her down. As slow as she was Velaris could realized her actions immediatly. To prevent her action he damages Miaka even more and ripped her body apart and poured water inside her sparking parts.
Miakas body began to twitch strongly. The sound of shortening circuits, malfunctioning and misfiring servos were to hear. The smell of something burned filled the air. Her whole body stopps to move. The sparking of her electronic parts stops. Then her vision went black.
Miaka is laying like a souless damaged doll on the bed...
Velaris starts to laugh ... [to be continued]


(bigger version can be found inside my scrapbook on DA http://thurosis.deviantart.com/art/torn-apart-215943937)

[--NightBattery--]

*Choke* *choke*
It's actually very good!.