Potential custom script. What should be changed.

[fembotfan]

It has a conversion base.

Characters:
Droidanna Andrews (Robotica, or Cyborgirl, or Model 1.4)— A
sexy heroine with mechanical strength and the ability to control most
electronic devises via her technologically advanced robotic body. She
is a recent human to fembot convert and the most advanced prototype
the FemTech Institute has ever built. In her down time, she is the CEO
of her own company, and she just so happens to be Technotica’s new
neighbor.
Sasha Butler (Technotica) - The sexy Villainess (potentially a more
robust woman), her plan is to slowly capture and reprogram all the
robotic women in the world to make them her sleeper agents, with
eventual world domination as her goal (that’s right, she is aiming
high!) Her alter ego is the Chairwoman for the Anti-Robot league
(ARL), an organization dedicated to ending the voluntary robotic
conversion of wealthy women. Her biggest secret, is that she is
herself a highly advanced Android.

First Scene, exterior Shot Robotica knocks on a door and Technica opens
it (both are dressed in business attire with their metallic suits on
underneath). Their conversation is something like: hi I'm your new
neighbor,
that's great it’s nice to meet you, come on in)

Second Scene Interior: They sit down and talk
Technica talks about how she hates robots and anyone that chooses to
become a robot, she says they are all elitist rich people that want to
live forever, and eventually control the world.
Robotica sits listening but she starts to look angry until finally she
says hey you know what, (potential easy effects shot, her eyes blink
with lights), I am a recently converted android. I've been scanning
you since I came in and I think your hiding something big, I think
you’re a robot too.
Technica's eyes get big and she pulls a remote control out from under
a couch pillow, she points it at Robotica.
Robotica : “what is that you better not .. ...”
Technica pushes a button and freezes / deactivates Robotica's body
(frozen mid movement, the camera can pan over her body).
Technica pushes another button and Robotica mechanically looks straight
ahead then stands with her arm at her sides. Technica removes Robotica's
clothes to display her costume (something metallic).
Another button push, and Robotica can talk, but her body remains stiff
but movable as Technica begins to undress Robotica's frozen body (she
can press the remote when needed to have Robotica lift her legs).
Robotica: "I knew it you are a robot! You would never have access to the
technology to build a cybernetic override device without extensively
studying an android body"
Technica: "I have studied many android women, women that I have
captured and reprogrammed to serve me. The androids don't even know
they have been reprogrammed.

Robotica: “You must be Technica!”

Technica: “Hmm you know who I am, but who are you?”

Robotica: “I am not going to tell you anything”

Technica: “you don’t have a choice” presses a button on the remote

Robotica: in a robotic voice “Human designation Aubrey Droidanna
Andrews, Codename Robotica, Femtech Unit 1.4 prototype cybernetic
convert” she blinks and in her regular voice ”How dare you!”

Technica: “Well well Robotica I believe congratulations are in order.
Your scanning program is correct, I am a robotic convert. I will steal
your enhancements and study them. I need to pass for human, until my
plan is complete."
Robotica: "you are the chairwoman of the Anti-robot league, but you’re
cybernetic. Technica, you need some serious reprogramming"
Technica: "You obviously don’t understand. I love fembots, I can
reprogram them and eventually control them all. I plan on scanning all
the data in your processor after I plug you in. Soon I will be able to
accelerate the reprogramming schedule. You are quite attractive; I bet
you have all kinds of
lovely upgrades."
Robotica: "My friends will come looking for me and you will be discovered."
Technica: "wrong, when you leave here, your memory banks will recall
only a lovely visit with your new neighbor. Besides, when you have
your friends alone with you, you will revert to my slave, and you will
reprogram them one by one."
Technica presses a button on the remote and Robotica mechanically walks
off to the bedroom.

Third scene
Technica presses a button and Robotica climbs onto a table or bed.
Robotica is laying on her back with her legs spread and her head turned
to the side (a laptop right behind her head). Technica then plugs a
cable into the back of Robotica’s neck.
Technica: types a bit on her computer “I am almost done here soon you
will be completely reprogrammed"
Robotica: "you won't get away with this! The FemTech institute will find
out, they will catch you.
Technica: "as this program runs, I am off to a meeting with the
League. But first lets turn off your main processor.” Technica types
in a command on the keyboard, Robotica freezes right as she is starting to
say something (great frozen face look) then Technica places the remote
onto the table and leaves the room.
Robotica blinks then mechanically / robotically reaches over and picks up
the remote control. She studies the remote, then points it at herself
and pushes a button before moving regularly. She, unplugs the cable,
then lays her body back in its original position, hiding the remote
under her arm, and waits.
Technica returns and walks to the computer: “What a great meeting,
things are progressing quickly. Hmm, there is something different
about your system."
Robotica: "that's right, I am different."
Robotica points the remote at Technica and freezes her.
Technica: "Wait no! How did you... how did you... how did you.. How did .. how
are you not reprogrammed"
Robotica gets off of the bed and presses a button making Technica undress
Robotica: "The FemTech Institute added a few special features when they
built my new body, features to specifically help me catch you. For
starters, I have
two processors "
Robotica pushes a button and Technica lays down on the bed, Robotica plugs
the laptop into Technica’s neck.
Robotica: "it is you that is going to be reprogrammed, the anti-robot
league is finished."
Technica: "no I cannot be reprogrammed, I cannot be re.. re.. re… (in a
monotone voice) re.pro.grammed. I can not be"
Robotica strips Technica prior to reprogramming her, and the scene fades to black.

What should be changed?

[dieur]

Well, of course you don't have to change anything!

If we're talking personal preferences, then here are some ideas to spur the imagination:
A) Extend the scene where Technica is hacking Robotica to uncover who she truly is. One of my favorite scenes is when a fembot is lying on a table, incapacitated, tied down, whatever, but aware as someone is tinkering with her head. The soap power2007 found where the girl is looking around while the scientist is working in hear head is sexy: http://www.fembotcentral.com/viewtopic. ... 4&start=30. Similarly, in that Cyborg 2 movie where the villain first has to recalibrate A. Jolie's voice module:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HT6tqD6pMqQ

B) A remote control that can just automatically override a cyborg body is too easy . Suppose Technotica has to trick Robotica into making herself vulnerable somehow (but of course, she knows exactly how to do that from her experience). When R. reveals that she knows T is a bot, T instantly turns apologetic, and gives a story about how she's forced to, I dunno, lead the anti robot league because some of the top officers suspect she is a robot and she has to throw off suspicion or else they will come after her. Or I know, how she was unwillingly transformed and hates robots because of it, but perhaps a kind, caring robot might be able to change her mind. In any case, all she needs to do is get close enough to R. to A) Remove some IR receiver cover, slap on a device, whisper some hack, whatever works.

[--NightBattery--]

i think adding some garbled speech would be...G.oood

[fembotfan]

Dieur,
Thank you for the feedback, I like both of your suggestions.

Battery,
It would not hurt to garble a bit of Technotica's speech there at the end.

If I ever have the money, I will see if I can have this made.
Thanks gentlemen.