AlyssaBot: idea for a story I have. PLEASE READ AND REVIEW

[La Femme Nikki]

So I have an idea for a story about a robot who was originally designed as a teenager to be a perfect child and after years of being under her parents' control, moves out on her own to discover herself.

In the beginning, Alyssa, the title character, is still very prudent, however through her best friend Michaela who is another,more rebellious, android we see Alyssa slowly starting to change. It also later on becomes apparent that Michaela may not have Alyssa's best interests at heart.

Also, Alyssa develops her first crush when she meets, Jade an android who was once a human boy, but because of an accident, was transformed into a female sex robot. Alyssa finds herself very confused by these new feelings of extreme nervousness, wistfulness and even jealousy, given the situation and the fact that she's never experienced them before, despite having her own experiences with dating and sex with her own kind (other androids). She does her best to repress these strange feelings, especially around her new friend, but this only backfires on her causing her to slip up and malfunction.

[bilbo]

Lets not go any were near 'minors'

[DukeNukem 2417]

Do what I did for "The V.I.C.I. Diaries": Change the characters to over-20s college-age students (a more ripe time for rebellion anyways), and it'll be perfectly acceptable.

[MisterXYZ (RoboTomo)]

Teenager as a perfect woman???

So AGAINST the FC rules... unless you say that she's 21, but with the looks of a teen.

[La Femme Nikki]

Do what I did for "The V.I.C.I. Diaries": Change the characters to over-20s college-age students (a more ripe time for rebellion anyways), and it'll be perfectly acceptable.

Well I wrote she was ORIGINALLY designed as a teen, but in the story she's 18-21ish as are the other characters listed. I'll push the age more towards 20 for future postings.

[La Femme Nikki]

Teenager as a perfect woman???

So AGAINST the FC rules... unless you say that she's 21, but with the looks of a teen.

Pretty much..I wrote originally designed as a teen but on her own now, meaning an adult. But obviously a robot won't change that much psychicaly. Should've made that more clear

[DukeNukem 2417]

Do what I did for "The V.I.C.I. Diaries": Change the characters to over-20s college-age students (a more ripe time for rebellion anyways), and it'll be perfectly acceptable.

Well I wrote she was ORIGINALLY designed as a teen, but in the story she's 18-21ish as are the other characters listed. I'll push the age more towards 20 for future postings.

Good call.