Awake (Part 3)

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Awake (Part 3)

Post by TW » Mon Dec 21, 2009 8:41 pm

Hey everyone!

Here's the third installment, hope everyone enjoys, and enjoy the holidays!

Awake (Part 3)

“Recharge complete. Unit ‘Jenny’ 0078 entering autonomous mode. Aah!” Jenny gasped as her AI resumed control of her body. She looked around her darkened room and checked her internal clock. 6:29 AM, another full charge, and another 18 hours before she’d have to charge again.

Jenny sighed, and removed the plug from her chest. She was about to close the panel when she noticed an indentation and a small damp spot on her bed. Kelly had been here.

Kelly…

The name evoked a flurry of activity in her processors. She took a deep breath and reset her emotional subroutines. She wanted some clarity.

Yesterday’s tryst had obviously meant something to the girl. Jenny could tell by the way Kelly held her afterwards. But there was more there. It had been hard to tell in her state, but one of her sexual subsystems could have sworn it saw increased arousal in Kelly when she malfunctioned during intercourse, and definitely again afterwards when her panel was open.

Jenny looked down as the oval seam reappeared and she lifted the cover free. The whirring of her servos was noticeable now as she propped herself up against the bed’s pillows to give herself a better look. What did Kelly see in that cavity full of blinking lights, flash drives, chipsets and wires? Jenny shook her head. She mimicked Kelly’s earlier penetration by tracing her finger along the inside rim of the panel. A quiet moan escaped her lips as she made another orbit.

She hadn’t wanted to say anything to Kelly, but when her hands were near her circuits she felt…nervous. Jenny wasn’t afraid that Kelly would do something malicious to her or harm her in any way, but the very fact that something could have happened made her both uncomfortable and aroused.

On the outside, Jenny knew she was built tough. She was waterproof, and her lightweight alloy endoskeleton could withstand forces hundreds of times what humans could with no detriment to her functionality, but reach inside…?

Jenny felt a wave of nervous excitement course through her systems as she stuck her hand into the cavity. Her delicate fingers closed around one of the chipsets, and she swiftly yanked it free.

“ERROR. ERROR.” Jenny’s head twitched to the right. “Cannot access subsystem LBM51C, invalid address. System malfunction. Please Service.” Her body shuddered and dozens of error messages appeared in her vision. “O-okay. B-better put th-that b-backk.”Jenny continued to twitch and jerk as her processors struggled to compensate for the missing hardware. With effort, she slotted the chip back into her violated circuits and collapsed backwards as her systems re-initialized the hardware.

Within minutes, her processors had corrected the errors, and she was back to normal. She shook her head. Tough on the outside, she thought, but mess around a little inside, and we’re-cookies. Ok, maybe her systems weren’t quite repaired. She ran another diagnostic and found the last remaining error. Was that what Kelly saw in her? Outer strength, but inner vulnerability? Or just the noticeable artificiality of a machine versus a human? Either way, she knew that somewhere, deep down, a special relationship between the two was forming, but Jenny needed to know more.

Jenny sat back and contemplated her options, until she sat up with a smile as her social matrix processor devised a course of action. She ran it through her logic circuits and was satisfied with the results. Today would be an experiment, she decided. She sealed up her panels and pushed herself off of the bed. Slipping on her nightie, she walked down to the kitchen to begin making breakfast.

Meanwhile, in her room, Kelly bolted out of bed. She was so excited she just couldn’t sleep anymore, not after spending the whole night dreaming about Jenny. She heard Jenny leave her room, and her parents stirring in the room next door. She knew she couldn’t seem too eager, but thoughts and ideas of how to spend the day with her android lover filled her head. Kelly quickly gathered her things and went off to the shower. She had to buy time, she figured, and her anticipation would only serve to further heighten her excitement.

She showered and got dressed, putting on a white tank-top, brown three-quarter length pants, and a blue vest. She strolled down the stairs, bright and perky, to greet her family.

Greg perked an eyebrow as she entered the kitchen. “You’re up early. You feelin’ ok, hon?” he said between bites of toast.

Kelly spotted Jenny over the stove cooking eggs, who winked at her. Kelly smiled. “You bet, dad. Just up to make the most out of the day!”

Linda laughed. “Okay, sweetie, it’s good to see you get up with the humans.” She gave Jenny a wink, who smiled back in irony. “So, any big plans for today?”

Before Kelly could reply, Jenny turned around. “Actually, I was hoping Kelly and I could go into town today. I haven’t really been out of the house at all, and I’d love to get the chance to see more of the area.”

Greg shrugged. “I don’t have a problem with that. Linda?”

“Sure thing. We trust you girls. Besides, I think Jenny needs some clothes of her own. You can put them on the credit card. We’ll leave you the car.”

Kelly, meanwhile, was nervous about taking her lover out in public. “Are you sure that’s a good idea? I mean, what if people find out…” She trailed off.

“Find out what?” Jenny asked. “I’m just your second cousin, visiting from America. Why would we want to hide that?”

Greg laughed. “Yup, I think Jenny can handle herself just fine, so stop worrying and pull up a seat, Kels.”

Kelly sighed and pulled up a chair to join her family for breakfast Minutes later, Jenny brought eggs and bacon over, and ate them with the rest of the family (“Breakfast is the most important meal of the day!” she smiled.) Kelly knew that she was probably just replenishing her fluids from yesterday’s activities. They finished up, and she busied herself with the dishes as Jenny went upstairs to get ready. Her parents set off for work, and Kelly was left alone with her thoughts once more.

She didn’t have long to contemplate, though, as Jenny soon came down the stairs. She wore a periwinkle blue t-shirt, black jeans, and a white hoodie today. Kelly was surprised at just how ordinary she had made herself look. Good, she thought, probably better not to draw attention to herself. Jenny soon came over to help her clean.

“Hey,” she said, gently squeezing Kelly’s shoulder. “Yesterday was a lot of fun, and it really meant a lot to me.” She placed her arm around the girl’s shoulder. “You mean a lot to me, Kelly. More so than Greg or Linda, you are special to me.”

“Oh, Jenny!” Kelly spun around and wrapped her in a bear hug. Kelly’s eyes were wet with tears. “You mean so much to me, too! More than anyone!” Jenny sighed contentedly as Kelly sobbed into her shirt. Inwardly she smiled. Sample one-Status: Complete.

The two held each other for a long time, until Kelly’s sobs subsided and she began softly pecking Jenny’s face, caressing her cheeks with the back of her hand. Jenny allowed herself one slow, wet kiss before she pushed away. Kelly mewled and pawed after her. Jenny grabbed her hand.

“Not now, Kelly.” She told her softly. “There’s so much to see out there, and I know that once we start in I’ll never want to leave the house!” Kelly nodded and regained her composure. Jenny leaned in and delivered one last kiss. “I want to save the best part of the day, for last.” She explained in a husky voice, and nibbled lightly on Kelly’s earlobe. Kelly felt a wave of passion rush through her and she smiled. They returned to the dishes.

“Okay,” Kelly said once they were done, twirling the car keys around on her index finger, “let’s see...wallet, license, purse, keys, money, ‘rent’s credit card (thank you), phone and… anything else?” Jenny just shrugged. “Alrighty, you don’t have a bag, but I suppose you don’t have anything to put in one, so we’ll fix both of those today.” She smiled and waved her parents credit card around.

“We don’t have to go nuts, now.” Jenny reminded her. “I’m sure your parents wouldn’t want to spend too too much on me…”

“Well I do, and if they have a problem with it, they can take it out of my account. Now let’s hit the town!” Jenny followed Kelly out into the garage.

“Nice car.” Jenny commented as the computer screen in the center of the dash warmed up.

“Mom and dad like it.” She turned to the android. “You sure you’re ready for this?”

“I-I guess so.” Jenny replied meekly. Kelly perked her eyebrow up at Jenny’s unusual timidness.

“Are you afraid someone’s going to find out you’re a robot?”

“Whatever are you talking about, cuz?” Jenny smiled.

“And you have no glitches, or errors?”

“Honestly, you have the weirdest way of asking, but yes, I feel fine.”

“You’re fully charged?”

Jenny rolled her eyes. “I got a full night’s sleep, if that’s what you mean.”

Kelly looked quizzically at her robotic companion and shrugged. She figured this must be Jenny’s way of getting them both in character. She put the car in gear. “Let’s go.”

Jenny nodded. Sample two-Status: Complete.

The two drove down the windy road that led off the bluff, radio blasting and windows down. Jenny must have looked up the words on her wireless connection, because she began singing along with Kelly to the music. The two laughed and bopped their way down the road, pulling into a parking lot in the town that served the beach down the road. They exited the car, and Jenny took off the sunglasses she had borrowed and looked around.

“Wow!” she gasped, regarding the variety of surf shops, cafes, boutiques, and other stores that lined the town’s main drag. “This town is awesome!”

Kelly laughed. “Yup, the mall’s up the road a bit, but I figured you’d like to take a look around main street. This is where I usually hang out.”

“Will we see your friends?” Jenny asked excitedly.

Kelly stopped. She hadn’t thought of the prospect of her friends being here. What would they think of Jenny? What would Jenny think of them? She just shrugged. “I don’t know, maybe. Come on!” Kelly grabbed Jenny’s hand, and the two took off down the street.

Kelly pulled Jenny into a beach boutique, explaining that it was time Jenny got her own swimsuits, instead of wearing hers. Kelly ran off to find some likely candidates as Jenny checked out the sunglasses.

“In the market for a new pair, are ya, love?” Jenny turned to greet a jolly, middle aged woman. Her nametag read ‘Jane’.

“I actually am, Jane.” Jenny extended her hand and rapidly sifted through online databases. “I’m Jenny, Jenny Connors.” She said, settling on a name.

“Ah, an American.” Jane smiled as she shook Jenny’s hand. “Plenty of you in town these days, eh?”

Jenny shrugged. “I really wouldn’t know, I just got in not all that long ago. Think you can help me find some nice sunglasses?”

“Oh, but the ones you have on are lovely!” Jane took them off of Jenny’s forehead. “Wherever did you get them?”

“I don’t know. They’re my cousin’s.” Jenny replied. “I don’t have my own sunglasses.”

Jane looked incredulous. “You came all the way to Australia without any sunglasses?”

Jenny felt her processors speed up as she calculated a response. “They… the airline lost my luggage.” Jenny put a note of dejection in her voice. “But I’m not sad, that means a whole new wardrobe!”

The woman chortled. “Well, you’ve certainly got your head in the right place, girl. Now try these on, they’re lovely…”

As Jenny worked with the older woman, Kelly returned with a pile of swimsuits.

“Whaddya think?” Jenny turned around and showed Kelly her selection.

“Kelly, dear!” Jane exclaimed. “Why didn’t you tell me your cousin was coming to visit?”

“Wha-I, um, yeah! It was kind of a surprise to me as well, Jane!” Kelly tucked the swimwear under her arm. “Those look great, um, cuz!” she flashed Jenny a thumbs-up.

“She’s a simply lovely girl.” Jane patted Jenny on the arm. “Sorry about the luggage, dearie, you two go ahead and pick out anything you want in the store. I’ll drop you a big discount!” she winked, and left the two younger girls to themselves.

“Luggage?” Kelly asked as they made their way back to the fitting rooms.

“Yeah, the airline lost it, remember?” Jenny winked and Kelly smiled. She put a pile of various types of swimsuits inside one of the rooms.

“Try those on, and let me know which ones you like.” Kelly instructed, and she turned to leave.

“Are you sure you don’t want to stay and watch?” Jenny asked.

Kelly smiled mischievously. “No, I have some of my own things to try on. Call me when you finish.” She shut the door behind her. Jenny’s processors whirred into action.

Okay, she’s got something planned. The android reasoned. I don’t know how many more chances I’m going to get to test this hypothesis, so I better make a good go of it this first time. Jenny stripped down to her underwear and flipped through the options Kelly had left for her, calculating which item would bring Kelly to the highest state of arousal. She finally settled on a shiny, metallic red bikini, whose texture felt closer to latex than to any other fabric. She stripped off her bra and removed the pads from the bikini top. Slipping it on, she noticed that the fabric clung to her curves perfectly. Its feel against her skin made her nipples harden, their points sticking out through the fabric. Perfect. She called for Kelly.

When she arrived, the two girls looked at each other, stunned.

Kelly was wearing a frilly white bikini that almost looked like a swimsuit version of a wedding dress. He arms were crossed, which squeezed her soft breasts together to form beautiful cleavage. Jenny felt her sexual systems begin to warm up as the feel of the swimsuit and the sight of her beautiful lover turned her on.

Kelly, meanwhile, was having trouble controlling the urges of her own. She quickly shut the door and released a small moan. She raced up to Jenny and locked her in a passionate kiss. Jenny was surprised, but slowly returned the embrace. She sighed as Kelly squeezed her breasts through the fabric. Kelly broke off.

“Oh! I’m sorry Jenny! I just couldn’t help myself!” She cried. “I still can’t…” She grabbed the android tight and felt her lover’s pert nipples poke her chest. Jenny slid her hand up Kelly’s bikini as their lips locked once more, squeezing the girl’s breast.

Kelly’s hand slid down Jenny’s panties, her fingers penetrating the android’s vagina. Jenny’s eyes shot wide open.

“N-nh!” She gasped. “Kelly, you’re so hot you’ll make me come right here!”

Kelly withdrew her sticky fingers and licked Jenny’s juices off. Tastes like a cherry candy! “You’re right.” She said between pants. “We’ll save the best part of the day for last.” She nibbled a bit on Jenny’s pert nipple, and tossed the robot a sultry grin over her shoulder. Jenny gasped as she sat down.

Sample Three-Status: Complete.

The two tried on more clothes without incident, and paid for them (plus Jenny’s glasses, which she now wore) up front. The two left the store.
A few hours later, the girls had finished shopping. Jenny, enthralled with her new wardrobe, practically skipped her way back to the car. They were just about to close the trunk when–

“Kelly! Hey, Kelly!” a male voice called from the cafe across the street.

Kelly’s head perked up as she gazed at the waving figure. “Hey, it’s Dean Marcus! Hey, Dean!” She waved back.

“Are those your friends?” Jenny asked as she closed the trunk. She pushed her sunglasses up her face.

“Yeah!” Kelly turned to her. “You-you want to meet them?”

Jenny brightened. “Of course!”

“Well, come on, then!” Kelly grabbed her and the two made their way across the street.

“Hey, Kelly,” Dean smiled, his wavy sandy-brown hair flipping in the wind. “Where have you been all week? We haven’t seen you around at all!”

Kelly smiled. “Sorry to blow you guys off, but I’ve been showing someone new around.” She stepped to the side to reveal Jenny.

“Hi guys!” Jenny chirped. “I’m Kelly’s American cousin, Jenny Connors.” Dean just gaped as Kelly introduced her to the gathered group of friends.

“That’s Dean’s sister, Anilee, and her boyfriend, Jake. That happy couple over there is Tom and his girlfriend, Renee.” The brown haired man and red-headed woman shook Jenny’s hand. “And, this, of course, is little Dean Marcus. Dean? Dean!” Kelly called.

“Eh-wha?” Dean had been too distracted by the beautiful blonde before him. “Sorry?”

“Dean, don’t stare, it’s rude.” Kelly lectured. “Now meet my cousin Jenny!”

“Oh, it’s ok.” Jenny waved it off and extended her hand. “Nice to meet you, Dean.”

Dean mumbled back a greeting and an apology and sat down. Kelly smiled and pulled up a chair.

“Yup, we all were in the same year throughout school, well, all except for Dean, and we’ve been inseparable ever since. Heck, I’ve known Anilee for about as long as I can remember!” Kelly reminisced.

“Ever since you moved in from Sydney in, what, 8th grade?” The brunette nodded.

“Something like that.” Kelly agreed. “Anyway, Anilee and I hung out all the time, and that’s when we started babysitting little Deanie-weanie over here.” She mussed the teenager’s hair as he feebly fought back. “Speaking of which, you made a decision as to where you’re going for university?’

“Well, I, uh,” Dean ran a hand through his hair, “I haven’t really decided yet. M-maybe I’ll go to America!” He looked at Jenny.

“Oh, hush!” Anilee snorted, “You’ve never thought about going to America before!”

“So where in America are you from, Jenny?” Tom asked, taking a sip of his drink.

She smiled. “I’m from Cupertino, California. It’s a bit south of San Francisco.”

“And how’s Australia, compared to that?”

Jenny swallowed. “Well, I can honestly say that it’s nothing like I’ve ever seen before!” She winked at Kelly, and the group continued talking. They seemed fascinated with her accent. Jenny asked a lot of questions about the group, but she paid close attention to Kelly’s interaction with Dean. The young man was definitely exhibiting signs of arousal both towards her and towards Kelly. Kelly had a couple of spikes of her own when he brushed against her a couple of times, but Jenny couldn’t really be sure. Sample Four-Status: Inconclusive. She vowed to pay more attention to their future reactions.

“Say it again.” Jake asked her. “Just once more, what is it?”

“A tomato.” Jenny replied, and the group laughed uproariously.

“No, no, no, hun.” Tom put his hand atop Jenny’s. “Like this: Tom-ah-to.”

“Tom-eh-to?” Jenny tried, the group laughed again. “Okay, gimme a sec.” She put up her hand and the group fell silent. She knew she could simply download an Australian accent package from the Venus Industries servers, but what was the fun in that? Her language software churned out a new permutation.

“Tom-ah-to.” She said with finality. The group clapped and smiled.
“We’ll make you an Aussie yet!” Jake clapped her on the back. Kelly smiled proudly.

Across the room, the sound of a glass shattering and a shouted “FUCK!” caused the group to turn their heads. “Move it, you dumb bitch!” the voice called again, and a waitress was shoved into the wall.

“Uh oh.” Dean buried his heads in his hands. “Don’t look now, here comes Tara.” Everyone but Jenny muttered a collective ‘Oh, shit.’

“Trouble?” Jenny asked. The group nodded.

“Watch out, she’s nasty.” Renee commented. “Shit, she’s coming our way!”

Jenny watched as a tall, buxom, raven-haired woman in her late twenties strode over to the group’s table by the window, her D cup breasts barely contained by the tied-off florescent pink shirt she wore. They bounced lightly as she stopped at their table.

“What the hell is your problem?” She demanded, her ice blue eyes flashing.

“W-what do you mean?” Dean squeaked. “We were just–”

“What I mean, fucking fairy boy, is why do you see it necessary to disturb my lunch with your incessant cackling? Look!” She shoved her chest across the table, pointing to a damp patch over her left boob. “Your whiny, high-pitched fucking twerp voices broke my water glass! Do you have any idea how hard this shirt is to clean?”

Jenny found that highly unlikely, but she kept her silence. There was something not quite right about this woman…

“Come on, Tara.” Kelly groaned. “I’m sorry you spilled on your shirt, but we weren’t bothering anyone else. Why can’t you just leave us alone?”

“Shut up, retard!” Tara barked. “It’s hard enough to enjoy myself without being distracted by the yappings of a dumb, blonde, bitch!”

Jenny had enough. This woman was directly insulting her most important user. She would be remiss in her programmed duties if she didn’t stand up for her, which she did, literally.

“Hey! I don’t know what your problem is, but she’s right. The entire restaurant was perfectly happy until you started this altercation. If you have some issue with us, you can just leave!” Jenny glared her emerald eyes.

Tara turned furious. “Oh, so the dumb blondes are multiplying now, huh? Well if you’re so smart, answer this: What fucking right do you have to tell me to leave!

“We are paying customers, just the same as you. And now, you’re disrupting our lunch many orders of magnitude more than we have disrupted yours.” Her eyes narrowed.

Jenny had no time to react. Just as she had finished speaking, Tara landed a vicious slap to Jenny’s cheek. She staggered back into her chair.

“That’ll teach you for your arrogance, you cunt!” Tara strode to her table without a second look back.

Jenny, meanwhile, shook her head like a dog, and rubbed her rapidly reddening cheek. Her left eye twitched.

“Jenny!” Kelly knelt by her side. “Are you ok?”

“Yes…” she breathed. “I need to go to the bathroom. Will you come with me?” Kelly nodded and they left the group, who were still in shock over the incident.

They made their way to the bathroom as Tara glared at them from across the room. Once inside, they locked the door and made sure there was no one else inside.

“Ok, Jenny, I know you don’t need to pee, what’s the problem? Are you damaged?” Kelly felt her lover’s cheek.

“No, my SynthFlesh is fairly resilient, and all of my processors and gyros are still operating efficiently. There are a couple dermal sensor overloads, but I’m in the process of correcting that now. That’s not the problem.” She shook her head. “Were you aware that…woman is an android?”

“What! Are you sure?” Kelly gasped.

“Yes, she is undoubtedly an old Venus Industries A-Series X100 Prototype Automate.” Jenny nodded.

“How can you be sure?”

“I recognized a Venus Industries wireless connection when I came in here. At first, I didn’t think anything of it, because we sell a lot of automated products with wireless routers, but it was a signature that primarily matches us androids. I then thought it could have been a refraction of my own wireless signal off of the glass.” She shook her head. “When she came over, I soon figured out it had to be her. I did a query through her optical sensors, just to be sure. She’s an android.”

“Jenny…” Kelly whispered. “Can you tell if anybody is an android? I mean, how many other kinds are there?”

Jenny shook her head. “No, I only recognized her because she gave off a Venus Industries-coded wireless signal and had given me time to query her optical sensors. There aren’t many other ways I can tell, unless she had a panel open.”

“So what do we do?” Kelly shoved her hands between her legs and hopped up and down.

“I don’t know. That model was decommissioned due to critical faults in its personality matrix that caused them to become aggressive and unstable as her dynamic social matrix processor degraded.” Jenny sighed. “That happened two years into their lifespan. Tara has been active for at least four.”

“And she first came here last year!” Kelly’s eyes widened. “Her bitchiness has only increased since then!”

Jenny put her hand on her friend’s shoulder. “Kelly, it is possible that Tara is malfunctioning. Our normal social protocols do not allow for us to cause physical harm to humans unless in self-preservation or the defense of our users.”

“So, she doesn’t know you’re an android too?”

Jenny nodded. “It’s unlikely. Her sensors will not have had the ability to determine my identity easily. Listen, if she’s malfunctioning, we have to take her offline. There’s no telling what damage she could do as her processor degrades further.”

Kelly stopped. “Jenny, how are you going to do that? I know it’s not exactly easy to open up her panels and press the deactivation button unless you know her registration code.”

“I’m working on that.” Jenny reassured her. “Go back to the table, I’ll be out in a bit.”

Kelly nodded and kissed her on her injured cheek. “Good luck.” She whispered, and left the room.

Jenny sat down on the toilet, and opened up her wireless connection.

Accessing Instant Message Application…Done

Login: J0078
Password:*****

User search: GreggyMac11…Found!

Opening Communications…

J0078-> Uncle Greg, are you there? It’s Jenny.

GreggyMac11-> Sure Jenny. What’s up? Is everything alright?

J0078-> I’m not sure. I believe Kelly and I have had an encounter with a malfunctioning Venus Industries android.

GreggyMac11-> Uh oh. What type?

J0078-> An old A-Series X100. I think her social matrix is degrading.

GreggyMac11-> Yeah, they had a problem with that a couple years ago. I’d say they definitely fixed that by your model!

J0078-> Thanks Uncle Greg, but I want to disable her before she hurts anyone, and I need something…special to do that.

GreggyMac11-> What, like some kind of virus?


Jenny stopped for a moment. Viruses were scary things for androids.

J0078-> Yes. I hate to say it, but I think it’s the best way to take her down. She rejected the handshake protocol when I tried to connect earlier, so I don’t think that I have the access to shut her down outright.

GreggyMac11-> Fair enough. This is really Linda’s area, though. She’ll need the time to put something together. Is there any way you can get her back to her place? That’ll buy us some time and make it easier for us over at Aphrodite to get a retrieval team out there.

J0078-> I’ll do my best, Uncle Greg. Thanks for your help.

GreggyMac11-> No problem. And Jenny?

J0078-> Yes?

GreggyMac11-> Change your screen name. You have more imagination then that.

System Alert: TheJoy78 has entered the chat room.

TheJoy78-> Is that better?

GreggyMac11-> haha I love it. Linda and I will get to work. Good luck out there.

TheJoy78-> Thanks. Take care Uncle Greg.

GreggyMac11-> ttyl.

System Alert: GreggyMac11 has left the chatroom.

Communications closed.


Jenny got up off the toilet and readied her attack. When the program finished compiling, she left the bathroom.

She stepped out into the dining room and stared directly at Tara, who was taking small bites of her salad. Eventually, gynoid looked up, and an irritated look crossed her face.

“What are you looking at?” she growled.

“You.” Jenny replied. Her eyes flashed as her emerald orbs locked with Tara’s icy blue ones.

Tara stood up suddenly. “Oh yeah? Well I…I-I-I…I think I’m going to return home now.” Jenny smiled as her program went to work. Tara turned and promptly left, and Jenny followed, grabbing Kelly on the way out.

Jenny monitored Tara’s wireless signal as Kelly pulled the car around. Jenny climbed in and they followed the malfunctioning droid as she climbed into her car.

“So what did you do to her?” Kelly asked, keeping her distance from Tara’s car.

“I overloaded her optical data bus. Her default programming will take her home to repair it.” Jenny replied.

“Wait, you blinded her and she’s driving? Are you insane?” Kelly gasped.

Jenny laughed. “No, no, no. All of us Venus robots have optical data transfer capacity in addition to other methods. It helps us maintain secrecy in areas where wireless and physical connections are dangerous or impractical.”

“Wow, you guys are chock full of surprises, huh?” Jenny just smiled. “How are you going to take her down?”

“Greg and Linda are writing a program for me.” Jenny’s voice quavered with apprehension. “Kelly, I’m going to give her a virus.”

Kelly stared back at her. “And you’re afraid about that?”

Jenny nodded. “A crash virus like that is not going to be easy for her to take. Depending on its severity, she may never boot up again. They do really, really bad things to us, Kelly, and I wouldn’t wish them on anyone.”

Kelly reached over and squeezed the android’s hand. Jenny squeezed back and rested her head on Kelly’s shoulder, she felt happy to have the girl as a mistress. She felt safe in her embrace.

“I know this is going to be tough for you, Jenny.” Kelly sighed as she stroked her shoulder. “But you said it yourself, she is a danger to everyone if she remains activated.”


“I know, it’s just…” Jenny shuddered. “I’m scared.”

“I’ll be there with you.” Kelly ran her hand up and down Jenny’s thigh. “I’ll be right there with you.”

Jenny nodded, and tried not to think that even if Kelly was there, she’d be powerless to stop the virus. She settled further into her seat as Kelly continued following.

Incoming message from GreggyMac11…

GreggyMac11->Hey Jenny, you there?

TheJoy78->It’s my head, where else would I go?

GreggyMac11->haha Sorry, I forget sometimes, you seem so human.

TheJoy78->Thanks, Uncle Greg, that’s a definite complement. So what’s up?

GreggyMac11->Linda and I have your virus for you. She really liked your screen name, btw. She found it fitting.

TheJoy78->Um, thanks, but maybe TheFear would be a little more appropriate at the moment!

GreggyMac11->haha Jenny you have nothing to worry about. It’s designed to work only on the X100 system architecture. Still, since a number of your systems are updated versions of hers, I wouldn’t execute the file yourself, just in case. Otherwise, we might see TheEnd, and we’d all feel TheSorrow!

TheJoy78->lol You really are a nerd, aren’t you?

GreggyMac11->Hey, I work with androids and computers all day, and some of them are more human than the people I work with! How can I not be a nerd?

TheJoy78-> Hey, I am an android. How can I not be a nerd?

GreggyMac11->Fair enough. Are you ready to receive?

TheJoy78->Let’s have it.

System alert: Download commencing-File:TheEnd22.exe, 0%...23%...47%...68%...89%...100% file downloaded.

TheJoy78->TheEnd, oh Joy…

GreggyMac11->lol

TheJoy78-> Should I scan it for viruses?

GreggyMac11->You’re too funny. All you have to do is send it to her, and it’ll execute. You may need to distract her, though, otherwise she might be able to stop it.

TheJoy78-> Will it kill her, Uncle Greg?

GreggyMac11->It’s a crash virus, Jenny. She’ll shut down but it won’t wipe her memory. Trust me, I think you girls will enjoy it.

TheJoy78->I’m not sure, but I trust you, Uncle Greg.

GreggyMac11-> You should. Just give me a call when it’s done, and we’ll come by and pick her up.

TheJoy78->Okie Dokie. Looks like she’s turning off here. This is probably her apartment.

GreggyMac11-> Oh, yeah, one more thing. I checked the Venus Industries registry today, and there is a A-Series X100 Prototype Automate named “Tara” registered as living in town.

TheJoy78->That’s her.

GreggyMac11-> She’s been emancipated. She has no master, so you shouldn’t have any trouble with anyone else in the apartment.

TheJoy78->Thanks a lot, Uncle Greg.

GreggyMac11->You bet. Good luck, you two.

System Alert: GreggyMac11 has left the chat room.

Communications closed.


“I got it.” Jenny announced.

“Good.” Kelly replied. “I think this is her place. Are you ready to do this?”

Jenny nodded, and Kelly parked the car. Jenny tricked the electronic lock as Kelly looked up Tara’s apartment, and the two strode inside.

“She’s in apartment 28, that’s upstairs. C’mon” Kelly waved Jenny after her. They jogged up the stairs and Jenny knocked on the door.

“Who is it?” Tara’s hard-edged voice called from inside.

“It’s Jenny Connors, the girl you hit at the restaurant.” Jenny replied meekly.

“What the fuck do you want? And how the fuck did you find out where I live?”

“Please, Ms. Tara, ma’am,” Jenny bowed her head just in case Tara happened to be looking through the peephole. “I just want to apologize. My friend Kelly McDonnell is here, and we both want to try and make it up to you. We’ll do anything.” Jenny winked at Kelly.

“What you can do is fuck off!” Tara growled from beyond the door.

“Please, ma’am, we really just want to apologize.” Kelly called. “We’ll literally do anything you say.”

A pause from behind the door. “Anything?”

“We await your command, mistress.” Jenny’s eyes narrowed into a sultry stare, and the door unlocked and opened. They gazed up at the tall android.

“Get in here and shut up.” Tara pulled them inside, gazing left and right before shutting the door.

Kelly looked around the apartment. It was spacious, and most of it was bare, but she had a few comforts, such as a couch and a large flat-screen TV mounted on the wall. The kitchen looked bare and unused, just as she would expect for a gynoid.

Tara plopped herself down on the couch. “Now I always knew you were a fucking whore.” She pointed her finger at Kelly. “And now you’re going to prove it on this cunt!” She pointed to Jenny.

“Oh, please, no, Miss Tara.” Kelly pleaded. “She’s my cousin, and–”

“And you promised to do whatever I commanded! Now go and fuck your cunt of a cousin!”

Kelly turned. “I’m sorry, Jenny.” She said meekly, but the twinkle in her eye told of a different emotion. Jenny suppressed her smile, and gasped a bit as Kelly embraced her in a slow kiss.

“Kelly…” Jenny croaked, Kelly but a finger up to her lips.

“Shh!” She licked the side of Jenny’s face. “We must obey.” Her tongue probed Jenny’s ear.

“Must obey.” Jenny echoed dully. She nuzzled a bit at Kelly’s neck, and saw Tara’s hands begin to trail slowly towards her crotch. It was working.

Jenny slid Kelly’s vest off and slowly cupped her breast through the tank top. Kelly helped her strip off the hoodie, and Jenny guided Kelly’s hands to her own breasts beneath the t-shirt. After minutes of slow back-and-forth, the two lovers had removed all but their panties, and they stood there, gently kissing one another.

“Fuck her!” Tara screamed, her hands now rubbing her clit under her pants.

Kelly, with her lips locked firmly around Jenny’s, slid a hand into Jenny’s panties. Jenny let out a soft moan as Kelly’s delicate fingers stroked her lips up and down, feeling her wetness.

“With your mouth!” Tara called, moaning as she inserted her fingers into her own vagina. Kelly looked at Jenny with concern, but when the android nodded her consent, Kelly slowly slid Jenny’s panty bottoms down and stretched out on the floor. Jenny sat atop her face. She gasped as Kelly’s tongue began to probe her moist vagina. She reached down and slowly stroked Kelly’s pussy, and both of them moaned in ecstasy.

Kelly squeezed her own breasts as she lapped up Jenny’s delicious juices. The android girl writhed and moaned atop her, and Kelly was very careful not to push Jenny too far. Tara was likely putting quite a strain on her own processors, judging by the aggressive motions she made with her hands, but her eyes were still closed, perhaps remembering the touches of a master long gone. Jenny couldn’t begin her attack.

“Mmm, Jenny,” Kelly moaned as she swallowed some of the android’s juices. “You taste, mmh, soo good!”

“I want to try!” Tara stood above the two, and knocked Jenny off of Kelly. Jenny looked genuinely frightened as the taller android crawled her way towards her.

“Hey, don’t worry, baby.” Tara said, laying on the sass. “I’m going to give this little cunt the best ride she’s ever had.”

“Nn-GUH!” Jenny gasped as Tara inserted her face into her crotch. Her tongue moved in deep, and started out slow but soon sped up. Within moments, Tara’s tongue fired like a machine gun into Jenny’s pussy. Jenny arced her back and called out between gasps. “N-not r-ready!”

“Oh, trust me baby.” Tara looked up for a moment. “You’re ready, and delicious.”

But Kelly understood. Tara wasn’t ready to receive the virus! Without a moment’s hesitation, Kelly slipped between Tara’s legs and pulled down the android woman’s already dampened panties. Tara gasped as Kelly began working her tongue.

“Oh, you’re a clever bitch, aren’t you? Ooh.” Tara moaned as Kelly blew on her pussy, and went back at it. Tara slid her face back into Jenny’s crotch, who was now squirming under the pleasure and processor load.

She couldn’t hold back any more. “Uhn! Uh-Error.” She squeaked, jerking against Tara’s face.

Tara’s head jerked up. “You-you’re an android!”

Jenny stared right back down at her. “Th-that is correct.” Her eyes flashed as she transmitted the virus. “B-bitch.” She kicked Tara away and stood up as Kelly slid out from under her. Tara staggered as she stood.

“You bitch! You cunt! You-ZZT! You-you-you-youyouyouyouerrrrrrrrrr…” Tara jerked her head to the right. “System Alert! Virus detected! Virus detected! Unable to-to-to contain! Virus! System unable alert alert! Cuntcuntcuntcuntcun-EEP!” Tara looked as though she’d been shocked. Her head twitched as she vibrated in place for a moment before she straightened up to attention and her body froze in place.

Jenny, meanwhile, clutched at Kelly’s naked form, burying her head into Kelly’s shoulder as she watched.

“Is it over?” Jenny breathed, watching Tara’s inert form.

Tara, however, had other plans. Her body slowly jerked back to life as she turned to face the two young lovers.

“H-hiiiiiii.”Tara smiled, her voice now lower and sultry. “My n-name is-is-is WARNING: CONFIGURATION FILE CORRUPTED-is Tarrrrrrraaaaaaa. I am a Venus In-industries A-Series X-X-X-100 Prototype Automatematematematemate.” Tara took a jerky step forward, and the seam around her panel appeared and popped out, thumping to the ground. Kelly stared in awe at the malfunctioning droid’s exposed systems, and watched as more and more of her sexual lubricant dripped down her thigh.

“I-I have been c-c-cERROR: CANNOT L-LOAD CONCONCONFIIIIIGG…FILE!!! Malfunction.” Tara’s body spasmed, then stopped with an abrupt jerk as something popped within her. Her servos rizzed as she took another jerky step forward, her artificial juices pooling on the rug beneath her. “Ssssssssexual sysssssstems on-on-onnnl-line. I willwillwill p-pp-plllllease y-you in any-Malfunction! Yyou in any w-way you desire-you desire-you desire-youdesire-youdesire.” Her voice rose in pitch and her head twitched with each repetition. Kelly could see her pussy grinding away against nothing as more and more liquid sopped out of it.

“-youdesireyoudesireyoudesire ERROR ERROR ERROR!” The lights in her panel flashed wildly, and a brief spark snapped from the circuitry. “T-this unit has suffered a critcritcritical m-malfunction and must ssssshut dow-own. System error at CSP01A. This unit-this-thisunitttttt error!” Tara dropped to her knees. “Crrrrr- Malfunction…Malllfunnctionnn…malllllllffffunnnnnnncccctionnnnnnnn…malllll…” The gynoid trailed off as she bent forward, LEDs and systems winking off one by one. Her voice slid to an unintelligible drone before shutting off completely.

Jenny clutched Kelly tight and sobbed into her shoulder. Kelly grabbed the shaking android girl tight and whispered reassurances into her ear.

“It’s ok, Jenny. It’s over now. You’re safe, lover, you’re safe.” She stroked her hand through Jenny’s hair and down her back. Jenny just clutched her tighter.

“Don’t let that happen to me, Kelly! Please, never let that happen!” She turned and looked dead into Kelly’s eyes. “I-I don’t want to go! Not like that! Please!”

Kelly squeezed her into a tight hug, their naked bodies pressing against one another. “That’s not going to happen to you, Jen. Not if I can help it. Not ever.” They stood and held each other for a long time, and Jenny slowly stopped sobbing and regained her composure.

“Thank you.” She whispered, giving Kelly a slight peck on the cheek. Kelly blushed, and suggested that the two get dressed and prepare to receive the team from Aphrodite. Jenny agreed, and the two cleaned themselves up as best they could, then sat down to wait for the retrieval team. A short while later, Kelly got a call on her cell phone, and she buzzed the agents up.

“Well, well, well, now.” Kelly’s father strode in after the retrieval team. “What have we here?” He smiled and looked at the deactivated droid before him.

“Daddy!” Kelly raced to and hugged her father.

“Hey Kels, are you alright?” He ruffled his daughter’s hair as she nodded. “How about you, Jenny, you ok?”

“I’m fine.” Jenny replied, squeezing in to hug Greg. “A little shaken, but fine.”

Greg just nodded and held the girls as they rolled Tara over. Her left breast had popped out of her tied-off pink shirt, her eyes were wide and dull, and her face was still covered in Jenny’s juices. He noticed Tara’s panties and pools of her lubricant across the floor.

“Hey, Mike!” He called, and a burly member of the retrieval team stood up. “You want to open a window, mate? Smells like sex in here.” Mike smiled and nodded, and opened up the window. Greg took the two girls to the bedroom and out of the team’s earshot.

“I’m sorry, girls.” He said as they sat down on the bed. “I don’t want to make you relive this, but what did she do to you?”

“I-she-we, that is, Jenny and I, we–”

“We made love, sir.” Jenny’s cheeks burned as she cut Kelly off. “Kelly and I did, to distract her enough so the virus would work.”

“Oh.” Greg nodded. “Are you two alright?”

Kelly nodded, and Jenny sighed. “Yes, sir, it’s just an eye opener for me, we’re tough on the outside, sure, but mess around inside…” She shook her head, “and we’re cookies.” She smiled softly.

Greg perked his eyebrow up but said nothing. He knew AIs, especially those in humanoid robots, developed their own quirks. He patted the two girls and stood up.

“Okay, ladies, I’m not going to make you stick around while we clean up. Get out of here and go have fun.” Greg smiled and put his sunglasses back on. “I’ll see you two ladies tonight.”

They stood to leave, when Jenny turned around. “Uncle Greg, will she be ok?” She motioned her head towards Tara’s partially disassembled form.
Greg sighed. “She should be, but we’ll do a full checkup on her when we get back to the lab, and I’ll let you know tonight, ok?” Jenny nodded, and the two left.

“So, where to now?” Kelly asked as they climbed into the car.

“Kelly, I…” Jenny trailed off. “I just kinda want to go home now.”

Kelly just nodded. She could see that the incident had really shaken up the poor droid. She placed her hand on Jenny’s shoulder, and started the car.

Jenny was very quiet on the drive back home. Inside, however, her systems were a flurry of activity, trying to reconcile what had just happened, and come to terms with the day’s events. She barely even realized that they had arrived back home until Kelly called her out of her trance.

“Hey, Jenny, are you going to be ok?” Kelly rubbed her friend’s cheek as she got out of the car.

“Yes, I am, Kelly.” Jenny sighed. “I just need a bit to sort things out, that’s all.”

Kelly nodded and smiled gently. “How’s your charge?”

Jenny looked puzzled. “62% remaining, why?”

Kelly beamed. “Follow me.” She grabbed Jenny’s hand and led her down the path to the cliff. Jenny’s smile twinkled as the two sat down on the sandy rock.

“I told you,” Kelly began, “I come up here when I want to think.” She put her arm around Jenny, and the two leaned on one another. “So go ahead. We’ll stay until you’re ready.”

Jenny sighed and stared into the undulating blue waves below. She vaguely was aware of Kelly’s hand resting on her right breast, and she adjusted herself to put her own hand on Kelly’s.

The two held each other for a long time, bathing in the sun’s peaceful waves and the soothing sound of the waves breaking on the shore below.
After a while, Jenny picked her head up. “You know, I was running an experiment today.”

“You were?” Kelly turned to look at Jenny.

She nodded. “I tried to act completely human today, to see what the nature of our relationship was. I wanted to know if you liked me as a machine, or as a person.”

“Jenny! I didn’t know that meant so much to you!” Kelly rubbed her friend’s shoulder.

“I just have to know.” Jenny stared at her.

“Well, you’re wrong.” Kelly explained. “I love you both as a machine, and as a person. They both make you, you.”

“Love?” Jenny looked mildly surprised.

“Yes.” Kelly nodded. “I love you, Jenny Connors, Unit 0078.”

Jenny was silent for a moment as she thought about Kelly’s statement. Love was just as hard a concept for androids as it was for humans, but their answer was the same: ‘I know it when I see it.’ She smiled.

Jenny leaned in and kissed Kelly deeply. “I love you too, Kelly McDonnell.” A tear formed in her eye. “With every ounce of my being, with every circuit, servo, gear and wire, I love you.”

The two embraced with tears in their eyes, and kissed each other again. They made out on the bluff for a while, but eventually just sat and held each other close.

“Thank you.” Jenny whispered, squeezing Kelly’s hand. Kelly squeezed back, and the two stood and headed home.

The phone was ringing as they arrived back at the house. Kelly went to answer it while Jenny unloaded her day’s purchases. Kelly was still on the phone when she finished, so Jenny just stretched out on her bed. She stroked herself as she thought of her lover. A few moments later, Kelly stood in the doorway.

“That was Dad. He’s back at the lab, and he said Tara’s going to be ok.” Kelly told the android. Jenny sat up and Kelly sat down on the bed. “He said that the damage to her systems was easily repairable, and that they should be able to get her back out into the world in a few days, once they fix her personality matrix, that is.” Jenny smiled.

“Well that is good news.” She licked her lips. “Did they say when they’d be home?”

Kelly shook her head. “They said that since Tara had been online for a long time, they have a lot of data to sort through. They’ll probably be back late tonight.” Kelly sighed. “So, I was thinking, why don’t we go have dinner with Dean and the others later!”

Jenny perked up. “Yeah, that would be great!”

“It’s not going to be for a while, though, so we have some time to kill.”

“Yeah.” Jenny nodded. “I should probably get a charge in, too, just in case.”

Kelly looked slightly crestfallen. “Okay, I’ll be outside.” She stood to leave.

“Hey Kelly.” Jenny stopped her. “You know, you were doing a really good job, you know, before…” she looked up hopefully.

Kelly sat back down on the bed, her eyes alight. “Well, I, uh, just wanted it to feel natural, and you taste sooo good…”

“Well…” Jenny smiled playfully. “I was hoping you’d like to finish.”

Kelly’s smile widened. “I thought you’d never ask.”

The two made love on Jenny’s bed, Kelly playfully tonguing away at Jenny’s perfect pussy. Jenny bucked hard on her face, half in error and ecstasy. She let out a loud squeal as she came, soaking Kelly’s face in her juices.

“Over-over-over-overload!” she shouted as her pussy bubbled. She twitched and sighed electronically, but didn’t shut down. “You-error-you-you-ERROR: SEXUAL OVERLOAD you were terrific-ic.” Jenny sighed, breathing heavily and twitching occasionally.

“Thanks.” Kelly replied, licking up every drop. “You’ve still got some glitches, but you’re getting better!”

Jenny smiled and kissed her lover. “I am. Oh my, I do taste good, don’t I?” She leaned back as her processors recovered more. “Whooooo…” she sighed.

Kelly stood. “I’m going to get cleaned up. You can go ahead and charge.” She leant down and kissed Jenny again. “I love you.” She breathed.

“Come back when you’re done.” Kelly nodded and left for their joined bathroom. Jenny sighed and pulled out her charging cable. She looked down and watched as her charging port opened. The port that caused all the trouble. She shook her head and plugged herself in. She left her AI online, though, as she didn’t need a full charge.

Jenny rolled over and adopted a napping position. She listened to Kelly singing in the shower, and she felt truly happy to have her. She smiled to herself as she felt Kelly stretch out beside her, her breasts poking into Jenny’s back.

Kelly sighed as she held her android lover. She closed her eyes, and peace flooded her world.

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Thanks once again for reading this far. It's been fun writing these, and I'm glad I've seen such a positive reaction!

So, this one was rather long. Looking at my original copy, it runs about 20 pages. I might start a poll on this later, but informally, what do you think of the length? Too long, too short, or just right?

Thanks again, everyone, and happy holidays!

(P.S. Nothing quite gets me in the New Years mood quite like Silent Lurker's "Happy New Year" (http://www.fembotwiki.com/index.php?tit ... y_New_Year) or droidGIRL's old classic "New Year's Eve" (http://www.many-realms.net/LTBSA/stories/sara-nye.htm). I credit these two authors for largely introducing me to ASFR, so I'll shamelessly promote them wherever I can :D )

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Post by Bart » Mon Dec 21, 2009 9:50 pm

I find the length just right - maybe just a bit too long, but the dialog structure made it very easy to read (nice geeky idea with the chat room).

Is it just me? I'm hoping for a twist since part 2... Kelly has to be an android too - is she not? :)

Anyhow, wonderful story. Well done, TW. Hope to see more soon.
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Post by Section_Eight » Mon Dec 21, 2009 10:47 pm

Good gracious, is that a plot arc I see? And actual character development? Wonderful! You and that chap/gel/person/autonomous machine intellect that wrote the thing with the Mecha-Rin are really adding some new life to the genre!

Particularly enjoyed her super-scientific/logical approach to romance; very nerdy and in character for her. Makes her actions believable; she's not ridiculously human, she's a ridiculously complex machine working its way through a problem.
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Post by TheSpotConlon » Mon Dec 21, 2009 10:48 pm

I'm quick to agree with Bart...but don't avoid that plot twist just because we see it coming! Indeed, we need that catharsis!

Also? More. Please. Right now. Immediately.

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Post by tectile » Tue Dec 22, 2009 8:53 am

A really fine story.

There is no such thing as a proper length. If the story moves along, it can be a few paragraphs or 1K pages and I'll keep reading.

I kind of like the fact that Kelly isn't exposed as a bot. That's kind of a twist in itself around here.

I certainly would be up for a part four but follow your muse and write a new story if you got something cooking. Write more! Do it NOW! :)

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Post by DukeNukem 2417 » Tue Dec 22, 2009 12:42 pm

As the Ninth Doctor would say, "Fantastic!" Keep up the AWESOME work!
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Post by A.N.N. » Sun Dec 27, 2009 9:58 am

Great part 3!

Were there some subtle MGS3 references?

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Post by Deep Blue » Mon Dec 28, 2009 11:27 am

Would Tara join them later?

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Post by jpetoh » Wed Dec 30, 2009 8:45 pm

Excellent job so far! I'm really liking this.

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Post by Deep Blue » Thu Dec 31, 2009 3:10 am

More, is Tara has a human master before?

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Post by wjbaines » Thu Dec 31, 2009 6:11 am

I liked it too! Thanks very much for keeping the story index active. Now, if only I could figure out a way to accidentally get my shit together long enough to write a story too...

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Post by DollSpace » Sat Jan 02, 2010 10:16 pm

This was a really sweet story and I enjoyed reading it a lot. I hope we get to read the further adventures of Jenny and Kelly, too!

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Post by TW » Sun Jan 03, 2010 12:51 pm

Thanks for the great feedback, everyone! Your comments make it all worth it!

Now, to address some of said comments:

@A.N.N.: Yep, glad somebody picked them up! MGS3 is one of my favorite games, and probably the best of the series since it steered largely away from the traditional "Hideo Kojima mindfuck" that the other games are. However, not owning a PS3, I can't say that conclusively about MGS4...

@Deep Blue: I still don't know if Tara is going to make another appearance in this story, as I'm still in the process of writing it! As for whether or not she had a master, yep, she was definitely owned by somebody, and maybe that's good for some kind of sidestory, who knows?

@Kelly is an android conspiracy theorists: Nuts!

Thanks again everyone, and be patient: Part 4 is due out soon!

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PS: Sorry for replying to everyone like this, I'm still trying to figure out the quote thingy.

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Post by Lithorien » Sun Jan 03, 2010 9:06 pm

I hope Tara makes another appearance. I definitely sympathized with her plight during the malfunction. She deserves a spot in the limelight. :)

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Post by MisterXYZ (RoboTomo) » Sun Jan 03, 2010 10:14 pm

Nice...

I hope for some apparent reason that there could be a twist to this series of events in these stories. I like the part with Tara & Kelly, though.
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Tara was the better of the two

Post by barakuda » Sun Jan 03, 2010 11:59 pm

I think the wrong fembot malfuctioned. Tara much more intewresting. But otherwise good story overall. I wish Tara would return in her original and mabey get some slight revenge on jenny. Teach her for sending viruses that coul;d be deadly to a fembot

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Post by MannequinMachinist » Thu Jan 28, 2010 7:22 am

I think this has been a very well-rounded, well written piece so far. Hope to see more!
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Post by Grendizer » Wed May 26, 2010 11:29 pm

I realize I'm late to the party, but I wanted to say that this was enjoyable. I'm not normally a fan of stories involving malfunctions, but this worked for me. It felt really mellow, which is something I only come across rarely.
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Post by TW » Thu May 27, 2010 7:46 am

Mellow, huh? I have to say, now that I'm thinking about it, that was the sort of feeling that I was unintentionally going for. I wasn't really looking to write an action-filled epic with a really detailed story universe (not because I don't enjoy those stories-I do! I'm just not that good of a writer), but rather something like a simple, extended version of the ASFR stories I read in my younger days. I just wanted to include more character development and a more detailed plot.

I'm still on the fence about continuing this. I have about 3/4 of part 4 finished (right up until the good stuff, really) and an outline sketched out for part 5, but I feel like I might want to rework some of it. I anyone's interested in beta reading, let me know.

In the meantime, I have another little side-piece going, along with a little collaborative project which could see the light of day in the coming weeks. Until then, stay cool, cats.

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Post by Grendizer » Thu May 27, 2010 11:31 am

Well, I like both mellow and action. And you are right that it takes more characterization to pull it off mellow. Good to hear you might have more in the tank. If you make it happen, I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of the story.

It occurs to me that depth of characterization is a very important consideration in ASFR fiction, because the androids in question have varying degrees of sophistication that requires the author to approach their characters differently. For instance, there are many stories where androids are supposed to be less personal, and it wouldn't make sense for them to be very deeply drawn.
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Post by TW » Sat Jun 26, 2010 6:41 pm

Thanks for the encouragement, Grendizer. You have a very cerebral air to storytelling, and you were able to pick yet another insight out of "Awake" that I didn't consciously consider when writing it but unintentionally included, being depth of characterization. Kelly, Jenny, Tara and Dean are all reflections of archetypes that have been constructed on these forums for as long as I've been coming here (as for what archetype specifically, I'll leave you to figure that out :D ), just blown out a little bit more into my interpretation of their particular backstories.

I think I mentioned elsewhere that that one of my biggest influences are the old Silent Lurker stories (as well as the newer manips, which are outstanding by the way). Titles like "Aquaphobia" and "The Cheerleader" remain the gold standard for my ASFR reading today, but I always found myself either writing or imagining extensions to these stories pertaining to who the characters were, who built the androids and why. Not only does this provide more room for ASFR content :wink: , but it provides a deeper emotional connection to the characters that makes the story that much more enjoyable.

Aw, hell, you've got me all inspired now. I'm finishing this. If you (or anyone else, for that matter) is interested in beta reading, PM me. I should have part 4 done tonight.

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Re: Awake (Part 3)

Post by User1222 » Fri May 20, 2011 7:03 pm

I rarely post, but I'm really hoping for a continuation to this!

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Re: Awake (Part 3)

Post by hyperspace51 » Sat May 21, 2011 12:09 am

SLEEPER! SLEEPER! Please make Kelly a sleeper!

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Re: Awake (Part 3)

Post by liliwinnt6 » Sun May 22, 2011 6:15 am

I would be pleased to see a Tara under these girls' control.
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Re: Awake (Part 3)

Post by TW » Sun May 22, 2011 7:59 pm

Damn, just when I'd thought everyone had forgotten about this story...

Well I'm going to have to finish it now, aren't I? :D

Stay tuned. I mean it this time!

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