After almost a 2 year hiatus from writing because of school here is the next installment of my story. Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated.
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Well obviously he was going to have to find a way to solve this latest problem before turning her back on. He definitely didn’t need a repeat of what had just happened. “But how to fix this” he thought. I already entered myself as a User, why did it not recognize me outside of passive mode? Steve could only come up with two reasons. It either had to do with the settings of the user or was a software problem. Since he didn’t remember any additional options when he had the User screen open he figured he would start with the software and see where it got him.
Upon opening up the software option on the remote there seemed like a never ending list of programs. As he scanned the list of programs there was one that really caught his eye. It was the Melanie personality program. Figuring that this was as good a place as any to start Steve selected it. This new list seemed to be atleast as long as the previous one. It had a line for everything and anything that had to do with Melanie. There were lines for her name, age, address, parents, brothers and sisters, current relationship, friends and many many more. Well as much as he would like to just add himself as the current relationship he figured it would look very odd going from bottom of the barrel to boyfriend that quickly. “Doesn’t hurt to take a look at it though”. He selected the current relationship line and waited for the new screen to load. To Steve’s surprise there was no name listed. “ Are you serious. A girl this beautiful and she doesn’t have a boyfriend” he said to himself. Being a very curious individual he decided to see what would happen if he tried to enter himself as the current boyfriend. With no option listed for this on the screen he looked for a button that could help him with this. He found a button that simply read Add and pressed it. As words started to appear he started to read, “Add new User or load stored User information”. Again using the stored information seemed like the easiest way to go, so he selected this. “What relationship would you like to add to this user”? The screen gave him the options of boyfriend or fiancé. He definitely didn’t want to be anyone’s fiancé just yet so he selected boyfriend. It seemed that he had done something wrong yet again. The screen read, “User can not be added as boyfriend, User is not listed as a friend. Would you like to correct this?” “Let’s see how far I can take this” Steve thought to himself. He pressed the button for yes and waited for the new screen to load. Surprisingly there were a few options for being a friend. “Length of friendship, Quality of friendship, Background Information and an Auto Configure option”. Since this had already take a while to this point he selected Auto Configure. He was able to add himself as a friend since today with a slowly increasing Quality of friendship. This would allow him to be a friend while allowing it to happen slow enough to not look suspicious. He would start out as a Quality 1 friend and end at a 10 over the course of the next year. Doing this also allowed him to add himself as her boyfriend. The only stipulations were that the friendship quality would be for show around her family and friends while the status of boyfriend would only show up in private. This seemed to work out better than he ever thought it could. Now to turn her back on and hope for the best.
Steve just stood there for what seemed like an eternity. In fact it had been less than 3 seconds since he had pressed the ON button. As much as he had wanted to turn her back on, he didn’t want a repeat of the frantic yelling that happened earlier.
Coming back to reality Steve noticed that Melanie had come back to life and was looking around. Just as their eyes meet she says “Hi Steve”. Not that this should have been too surprising, but after all he had gone through the fact that something seemed to be going right was surprising. “Hi Melanie” was his reply. Melanie smiles at him and says “I’m sorry for yelling at you earlier. I don’t know what came over me. I feel real bad. What can I do to make it up to you?” Needless to say Steve’s jaw was now sitting on the floor and his eyes were as big as plates. “Honey, what’s wrong?” After coming back to reality Steve was finally able to answer. “Nothing, nothing at all.” “You didn’t answer me, I feel bad for yelling at you and I want to make it up to you” she says. He still couldn’t believe this was happening but figured he would go for it. “Come over here and give me a big kiss”. As she made her way over to him he realized that he was shaking just a little. She wrapped her arms around him and started giving him a lesson on what a girl could do with her tongue. It had to be the most enjoyable thing he had ever experienced. After about five minutes of this she broke off the kiss and let go of him. Steve realized that during this whole thing he had just stood there with his hands and his sides.
He had better get his nerves under control, especially if he was really going to enjoy this. “I still don’t feel like I made it up to you” Melanie said. Even though his brain felt like it was on overload, Steve wanted to try something else. “If you really want to make it up to me then do a sexy strip tease”. “Of course honey, anything to make it up to you” she said.
Her body starts swaying to an unheard song. Poetry in motion if he had to describe it, and it was only going to get better. In no time at all her tennis shoes were off of her feet and tossed across the room. Next to go was the button of her pants. She opened her pants and went right back to dancing. All the time working her pants down her legs with only her movements. “I can’t keep my eyes off of her” he thought to himself. Upon reaching her feet she seductively and slowly slips one leg out of the pants at a time. This all looks so rehearsed and easy. When she has both legs out of the pants she pushes them behind her and out of the way. A tight white shirt that leaves nothing to the imagination soon meets the same fate as the jeans. Now only wearing a matching bra and thong set that seems to hug her curves perfectly she continues dancing to that unheard song. At this point I just have to sit down. This is just too good to be true. As I look back at her I see that she had gotten down on hands and knees and is crawling to me. She pulls herself up using me legs, turns around and starts gyrating right over top of my crotch. While doing this her hands go up undo the clasp on her bra. The bra slowly come off and then gets tossed behind her and onto my lap. The gyrating continues. She starts to turn around to face me. At the same time her hands go up to cover her breasts. In a circular motion Melanie starts to rub her breasts. This goes on for about a minutes until her hands start a slow trip down to her thong. After slipping the thong off of her hips, her dancing does the rest to leave her standing there naked. Lifting her foot up to almost equal with her head, she pulls the thong off her foot and drops them into my lap.
“How was that” she asked. Steve was awestruck. “It was absolutely amazing” he said. “Good. It’s nice to know that all those cheerleading practices are good for something else” was her reply. As she makes her way out of the living room and into my bedroom she says “So now that you’ve got me all excited, what are you going to do to make it up to me?”
Steve couldn’t get his clothes off fast enough. The Velcro shoes came off easy enough, but it only got worse from there. Suddenly his fingers felt like little Vienna sausages. He couldn’t seem to hold on to anything. Trying to get his pants off only succeeded in popping the button off. Getting his shirt off was about as easy as erasing the national debt and his briefs almost caused him to become one with the floor. But at the moment none of this really mattered, he had a very sexy and horny robotic woman waiting for him in his bedroom.
After ridding himself of all his clothes Steve took a moment to compose himself before rushing into the bedroom. Coming through the doorway he finds himself wondering how he could have gotten so lucky. Melanie lays there on her side. Head propped up in her hand and eyes that just beckon him to do something about it.
She tells him to lay down on the bed and get comfy. Not sure what to expect he does what he is told. Laying on the bed and looking down across his chest at her. Just waiting to see what new pleasure might await him next. Melanie starts a slow seductive crawl up to him stopping only to tease his already swelling member. She had only just started and Steve wasn’t sure how much more he could take. Even slower it seemed now, she crawled up his body until their lips met. In a moment that seemed to stop time in its place, her tongue seemed to do a dance within his mouth.
In a ten minute span that seemed blend into one giant wave of pleasure Steve had the best sex of his life. Correction, it was the only sex of his life. He had nothing to compare it to but was fairly certain it couldn’t get much better. The things she was able to do to him. He wasn’t sure a human woman could do it any better.
As he layed there with his eyes closed soaking it all in Melanie got off the bed and went to the living room to collect her clothes. Coming back to reality a few minutes later he realizes that she was no longer in the room. Putting his briefs and pants back on Steve walks out into the living room and finds her sitting on his recliner putting her shoes back on. “I see you’re awake” she says. “As much as I would love to stay here with you longer I have to go. I have a paper I have to finish for Monday.” Finished tying her shoes she gets up and makes her way to the door. All he can do is follow along behind her. Reaching the door she turns around, gives him a kiss goodbye, opens the door and leaves.
Universal Remote Pt. 4
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Sudden turnaround
Woot!
That gets me to thinking...
In the story, she has status fields to help gauge dealings with creatures... that's a stranger so you act like this, that's a friend so you act like that, and so on, but it seems to me such a setting could only be a summary on the experiences to date - an "index" of a sorts. Presumably they would change in relation to experience, unless someone was going to go over each day's activities and adjust the settings appropriately.
If so, how would a system react to the "index" being changed, but none of the supporting data?
Thanks for posting!
That gets me to thinking...
In the story, she has status fields to help gauge dealings with creatures... that's a stranger so you act like this, that's a friend so you act like that, and so on, but it seems to me such a setting could only be a summary on the experiences to date - an "index" of a sorts. Presumably they would change in relation to experience, unless someone was going to go over each day's activities and adjust the settings appropriately.
If so, how would a system react to the "index" being changed, but none of the supporting data?
Thanks for posting!
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Thanks dieur, I can really sense the emotion in your woot.
I want to start by thanking you for the feedback. Even if you are questioning my story, it can only help to make my future writings better.
As in the story the settings include an Auto configure option. Without stating it my thought process had the Auto configure going through all existing programs and settings and configuring them to eliminate or alter any contradictions to the new settings. Hopefully this clears things up.
Thanks again for the feedback and keep it coming
I want to start by thanking you for the feedback. Even if you are questioning my story, it can only help to make my future writings better.
As in the story the settings include an Auto configure option. Without stating it my thought process had the Auto configure going through all existing programs and settings and configuring them to eliminate or alter any contradictions to the new settings. Hopefully this clears things up.
Thanks again for the feedback and keep it coming
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