Hey all,
Posting a new story here that I've actually been working on for over a year. Based on the manip, which was a Shit'Ton'O'Fun, I created two or three versions of a story that I was just never satisfied with. So, I threw them away and came up with a completely different approach that I'm REALLY happy with!
I made it a spiritual successor to a previous work of mine, Pause and Effect, which had some character rapport that always seemed ripe for further exploration/experimentation.
Alas, here is 'Pause and Effect: A Sticky Situation' https://www.fembotwiki.com/images/1/17/ ... uation.pdf
As always, I'd love to hear your feedback!
Pause and Effect: A Sticky Situation
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Pause and Effect: A Sticky Situation
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Re: Pause and Effect: A Sticky Situation
This is fantastic, probably my favorite thing you've ever written. The interplay between Daniel and Daphne is very well done, and she exists in what is to me a very appealing, ambiguous middle ground between simulated and genuine personhood.
"Men, said the Devil,
are good to their brothers:
they don’t want to mend
their own ways, but each other's"
-Piet Hein
are good to their brothers:
they don’t want to mend
their own ways, but each other's"
-Piet Hein
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Re: Pause and Effect: A Sticky Situation
The way you write fembots was always one of my favorite styles. So clearly artificial and, luckily for us, prone to failure, while also showing a personality.
On a semi-related note: will there be a continuation of Adminstrative Assistant? I really loved that story.
Thanks for sharing your work with us!
On a semi-related note: will there be a continuation of Adminstrative Assistant? I really loved that story.
Thanks for sharing your work with us!
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Re: Pause and Effect: A Sticky Situation
Thanks for the feedback, guys!
Bane, to answer your question...I've always had intentions of going back and finishing 'Administrative Assistant'...
Bane, to answer your question...I've always had intentions of going back and finishing 'Administrative Assistant'...
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