Sketch idea - Girls Gone Wired

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Sketch idea - Girls Gone Wired

Post by dale coba » Mon Oct 17, 2011 4:43 am

"Girls Gone Wired" - a parody title waiting to happen.
The familiar scene, one girl or two, interviewed on a bed.
The flashing, the fondling - all the familiar elements.

But what would make it ours?

What's the fembot/Stepford logic behind the encounter?

The GGW resistance (weak, ebbing) is to reveal too much - of her body, of her desires, of her sexual experience.
As she does reveal, she is aroused; and so she and we all now that the truth is that she is a very sexual being.

In our fantasy world, she is also therefore revealed as a very robotic woman.

Watching her initially, we and she thought she was a person primarily,
and secondarily a privately sexy young woman.
By the end of the session, she has turned this upside-down.

Clearly, she is foremost a sex machine; one which is also, almost as an afterthought,
capable of passing for human,
and that is also generally able to filter the world so as to not trouble her sleep of fembot denial.

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Re: Sketch idea - Girls Gone Wired

Post by bilbo » Mon Oct 17, 2011 1:40 pm

I'm liking the idea, what's your idea of a 'next' step??
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Re: Sketch idea - Girls Gone Wired

Post by dale coba » Mon Oct 17, 2011 2:53 pm

Given my limitations as a writer, and since I am no video producer,
I only envision tossing ideas into the public domain - ideally, ideas with a strong foundation, and enough color and detail to attract the discerning fembot fan.

The appeal of this title is that, if we figure out the central drama - what that fembot spin is on this erotica tale/porno -
then the generic lines and moves in a GGW scene are all familiar tools,
and each will easily be adaptable into its fembot-tale equivalent.
J. Jonah Jameson wrote:"Girls Gone Wired! My God, it's brilliant!
Everyone knows, those DVD's are the gateway porn for American teens.
The sketch writes itself!
We could advertise on F/X, and viewers couldn't tell our spots from the real thing!
But to your point: adding color to this plot might be achieved by listing some of the elements in a GGW interaction:
- which I will add here later.

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