A Contradiction of Life - Part 1.5

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A Contradiction of Life - Part 1.5

Post by The Liar » Thu Apr 28, 2011 10:00 am

A Contradiction of Life - Part 1.5

David was waiting in the lobby when Alyssa walked up and kissed him.

“That’s so you don’t start thinking this is a rejection again,” she explained, “but we have to talk… in private.”

“Um…ok.” David replied. David had spent much of the afternoon in a state of both confusion and elation. It seemed that Alyssa wanted to go out with him, but the strange things she kept saying… he couldn’t make head nor tail of them.

“We could go to my place.” he suggested.

“Your car would probably good enough. No wait…” She seemed to reconsider, “It would probably be better if we waited till we got to your place.”

As they walked to his car David couldn’t help but admire her beauty. Her slightly tanned skin, sky blue eyes, wavy auburn hair that seemed to shine in the sun light; less poetically he had to admit that her perk D-cups, and toned ass weren’t unappealing either. He felt a pang of guilt for thinking such things, given the seriousness of her demeanor.

They drove to his place in silence. Alyssa spent the whole time twiddling her fingers with a worried look on her face. David wanted to break the silence, but wasn’t sure how, it all seemed a little to sober to be about a date.

They got to David’s apartment, a fairly nice loft apartment. As David closed the door, Alyssa began to undo her blouse.

“What are you-?” David began, but was cut off by Alyssa.

“Look, please just stand there and be quiet!” Alyssa pleaded as she pulled open her blouse and grabbed her left breast. “I’ve spent a long time thinking of a good way to do this. There isn’t one, but this seemed like the least bad one.”

She took a deep breath.

“I will go out with you.” Alyssa stated, speaking quickly, “As you have now been approved to intimacy test the experimental android Anima — 0A0 - Type XZ — Integrated Matrix — ‘Alyssa’ which is technically my full name.” There was a hissing noise as Alyssa squeezed her breast, and the left half of her chest opened to reveal an access panel.

She gave a sheepish look, “So, well, um, yeah…surprise?”



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Authors Notes: I had originally planed this scene for the end of part 1, but the lunch thing seemed like a good breaking point. I had thought of putting this in at the beginning of part 2, but dramatically speaking you really need to put a break after that last line.
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Re: A Contradiction of Life - Part 1.5

Post by DollSpace » Thu Apr 28, 2011 11:08 am

This definitely makes a better ending for part 1... Now everyone collectively holds their breaths as we figure out what David will do next, and how much of this the company knows about, too...

I really really like this!
~Emily

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