Dale Coba's 'WILLOW BAY" CLIFF'S NOTES CONCLUSION

minkwheel · Post by **minkwheel** » Fri Jun 05, 2009 2:28 pm

DALE COBA'S "WILLOW BAY" CLIFF'S NOTES CONCLUSION
Capsulated review by LYNN KRIMUVED

SO LIKE here's what went down before....Creepy Stepford guy DALE COBA has this resort on an island called 'WILLOW BAY" ...he's trying to be some kind of FANTASY ISLAND MR. ROARKE kind of host. The island of WILLOW BAY has thousands of female robot servants to cater to the highly paying cliental All have money, all have fantasies, all will smile, all will succumb to Dale Coba's wishes. Dale Coba wishes to rule the world, and the unsuspecting cliental of the island resort WILL OBEY their master in time.

PAID GUEST STEPHANIE wishes to become a robot herself, and meets up with fellow Briton DR. SY BERMAN.... Sy will be converting Stephanie along with 999 other guests into their ideal existence....but with ONE exception...... in return for their conversion... Dale Coba will SECRETLY become their Lord and puppetmasster when he sees fit......Dr. Sy does not like those rules, for he himself will be subjected to the same treatment.... in short time, Dr. Sy finds a makeshift way to counter Dale Coba's influence ..... drinking heavily before the conversion to android form greatly diminishes Dale Coba's Stepford stranglehold on his will.... and he shares this secret with his beloved Stephanie..... upon her conversion, along with the other 999 paid guests.......STEPHANIEBOT'S WILL is spared along with only 699 of the other guests who drank before their conversion took place... the rest of the group WERE POLITICALLY CORRECT NON DRINKERS who took it upon themselves to not indulge in free hootch. COBA EVENTUALLY FINDS OUT THAT HIS ARMY IS NO LONGER 1000 STRONG, but he is still content that his new minions will be happy to hunt down and KILL the traitor known as DR. SY BERMAN.....the deadly army now known as THE 300 accepts their assignment, and begins to chase after the cybernetic SYBERMAN......as he asks his beloved STEPHANIEBOT (conveniently now with Berman implanted SUPERY POWERS) --to FLEE from WILLOW BAY and to search for the fabled A-MEN ... ANDROID HEROES FOR HIRE .... to come to the island, fight and conquer Dale Coba's plans for world conquest.

MEANWHILE, annoying characters from the LIVEWIRE WITH BUFFYBOT series of stories show up.... mainly baddie baddass badguy CARL'S JUNIOR... who has come to the island to lay claim of his grandfather's WEATHER CONTROL SYSTEM --- which Dale Cuba is using to transmit orders to all of his WILLOW BAY FEMBOTS and to THE 300 .... along with the Weather Control device's initial purpose to keep the island EASY BREEZY and BEAUTIFUL for all of the highly paying guests.

As far as the paid guests are concerned .... HAD TO PAY, CAME TO PLAY, THERE TO STAY, ROLLIN IN THE HAY.

ANYWAY......Coba sends THE 300 after traitor Sy.... due to all of the ROBOTIC ACTIVITY surrounding the island, British favourite super hero alien boy DR. WHO shows up believing that he will be dealing with Daleks, or Cybermen..........comes into contact with a fembot version of EASY ON THE EYES ROSE TYLER....kicks companion Catherine Taint out of the Tardis and finishes this story off with Easy on the Eyes Rose... meets up with DR. SY BERMAN whom he mistakes for an enemy CYBERMAN... easy to do, because he pretty much looks like one now... DR. WHO BEGINS TO USE HIS SINIC SCREWDRIVER laser thingie to be rid of SY BERMAN at the insistence of EASY ON THE EYES ROSE TYLER.............. She is actually 'THE ENEMY" here.... STEPHANIEBOT RETURNS WITH THE A-MEN AS HER BELOVED SY BERMAN is being sonically screwed by the Dr.... She holds Sy's metal hand as he lay dying...............Sy, in one last effort to survive tells Stephanie not to grieve, for they will be together forever.......Sy transfers his knowledge and all that stuff TO STEPHANIEBOT before his metal CYBERMAN body is ready for the recycle bin via the Dr.s Sonic flashlighty thing. .....THE A MEN make short work of the 300, but only because of an electrical disturbance caused by a huge fight at the WEATHER CONTROL DEVICE with CARL'S JUNIOR and his long suffering nemesis CIEPHER 5985............COBA ESCAPES.... the 300 will rise again, CARL'S JUNIOR SCHLEPS OFF OF THE ISLAND CHARRED,...without his weather control device....which still powers all of the island's fembots...... AAAAAAAAND the 300 army.......all who will resurface again in future stories.... STEPHANIEBOT, now fused with Sy Berman's knowledge of who and what the 300 can do, or go.... is now considered INDISPENSABLE to the A-MEN and she is taken in as a menber/matron .....PAID GUESTS such as RANCID INSANITY, KISHIN, INSPEKTOR INCOGNITO, and all of the rest, GATHERED UP AS MANY FEMBOTS THAT THEY FANCIED, and TOOK THEM HOME with them while Dale Coba was missing..... the 300 army went away in several directions to set Dale Coba's ultimate goal of world conquest into action.... the A men have their work cut out for them..... and the guests on the island are pretty happy with their consolation prizes as they leave the island ------well....it IS experiencing several JERRY BRUKHEIMER EXPLOSIONS all over the place.... paid guests grabbed as many fembots that they could ........uh...........SAVING them from BLOW UPPINGNESS too............ Honorable as that may seem, we'll go with that as a HAPPY ENDING, as close as any we're going to get from this story .... STEPHANIEBOT RETURNS TO A-MEN CLOUDBASE to begin her training as an A-MEN MEMBER........aaaaaaaaaand this............... spins off from WILLOW BAY and BUFFYBOT...........into a new set of stories featuring TALES OF THE UNTOLD TALES OF THE A-MEN .......... SUPER FEMBOTS, SUPER STORIES.......SUPER CHEESYNESS .......and THIS story is ...... SUPER FINISHED.

Baron · Post by **Baron** » Fri Jun 05, 2009 4:08 pm

Bravo!!! I've been toying with my own continuation ideas, once the way was clear. Don't want to spoil any surprises, but the rough ideas so far look promising. Stay tuned........

minkwheel · Post by **minkwheel** » Fri Jun 05, 2009 4:37 pm

.....and I for one will be eagerly awaiting what deviltry you will be writing. Go for broke Inspektor..... and THANK YOU for contributing to the original story. The original is off the boards now, so I wanted to finish everything up quickly and start fresh with a new cast...........and yes..... older characters will pop in as time goes by....... so WHAT'S UP YOUR SLEEVE? ---REACH OUT YOUR HAND, BARON, I'M PASSING A TORCH TO YOU. -- minkwheel

Baron · Post by **Baron** » Thu Jun 18, 2009 9:52 pm

minkwheel wrote:.....and I for one will be eagerly awaiting what deviltry you will be writing. Go for broke Inspektor..... and THANK YOU for contributing to the original story. The original is off the boards now, so I wanted to finish everything up quickly and start fresh with a new cast...........and yes..... older characters will pop in as time goes by....... so WHAT'S UP YOUR SLEEVE? ---REACH OUT YOUR HAND, BARON, I'M PASSING A TORCH TO YOU. -- minkwheel

I'll take that torch eventually, Mink. My initial continuation ideas have snowballed tremendously, but unfortunately I'm also dealing with some offline issues that are eating up huge blocks of time {and are doing a number on my nerves}.

For now, I can give y'all a general synopsis. I'm picking up roughly where you left off, but I'm retaining all the characters of my continuity within the original Willow Bay thread. Each of Inspektor 12's companions will get her own chapter to flesh things out from the original storyline. There will be plenty of humor, and not a few affectionate inside-jokes - plus some surprise villainies along the way. I'd like to be at least one chapter ahead of what I post so that I can maintain a steady flow without too long a gap between installments. But with the time-constraints already mentioned, I'm still not quite ready to kick things off yet. Hopefully this will change within the next week or two - please stay tuned!!! I think it'll be worth it - what I've got done already has a good feel to it.

Be ready - R.O.S.I.E is coming soon!!!!