Sam Pt. 3

jak · Post by **jak** » Wed Aug 20, 2008 2:51 pm

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DollSpace · Post by **DollSpace** » Wed Aug 20, 2008 7:00 pm

I like it. I like it a lot, as usual! I can't think of anything right off to say except that I liked it and once again you got me emotionally. I can't wait for the continuation!

Catie

Bart · Post by **Bart** » Thu Aug 21, 2008 9:39 pm

Outstanding story about love, soul, relationship, trust, belief. The cast-away / lost in the woods with no help in sight / scenario is very exciting too and very well described. I really feel like being there and cannot wait to read more.

This is so much more than a standard sexbot story - not that I don't like those, but THIS story actually makes me read it over and over again... It evokes compassion. I really hope that Milo and Sam will be okay.

Keep it up jak, you are very talented!

BA2 · Post by **BA2** » Sun Sep 07, 2008 12:08 pm

Jak,

Almost goes without saying but - superbly written, original and moving. I've no doubt you could write about anything under the sun but I hope you revisit this genre / theme from time to time.

BA

jak · Post by **jak** » Sun Sep 07, 2008 2:01 pm

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AK · Post by AK » Sun Sep 07, 2008 2:35 pm

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jak · Post by **jak** » Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:48 am

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BA2 · Post by **BA2** » Sun Jan 18, 2009 4:34 am

Great to see you back! I hope you're feeling better,

BA

DollSpace · Post by **DollSpace** » Sun Jan 18, 2009 11:08 am

Welcome back! It's been awhile, and I've definitely missed chatting and seeing your writing. This is yet another great installment, and I can't wait for more!

By the way, can you send me an email with the complete story up to this point? It's been awhile since I've updated the story archive and I want to make sure I know where I left off! ^_^;;;

Thanks,
Catie

Outsider · Post by **Outsider** » Sun Jan 25, 2009 8:19 pm

Magnificent story. My only suggestion is to link to the previous chapters:

Part 1
Part 2

I had to cross-check the previous chapters - wanted to re-read the apple part and needed to check what had happened 40-odd years before.

DollSpace · Post by **DollSpace** » Sun Jan 25, 2009 8:49 pm

Outsider wrote:Magnificent story. My only suggestion is to link to the previous chapters:

Part 1
Part 2

I had to cross-check the previous chapters - wanted to re-read the apple part and needed to check what had happened 40-odd years before.

It's easier to link to the other parts of the story in the Story Archive. All the parts of stories are compiled there. I'll update it more later; I've been kinda slacking lately... ^^;

~Catie

jak · Post by **jak** » Thu Mar 12, 2009 11:08 am

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AK · Post by AK » Thu Mar 12, 2009 11:36 am

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