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Post by Mirage » Wed Jul 04, 2007 1:41 pm

I just want to warn everyone on this board, that when the gallery is back....

Something great (well, I think it's great!) will appear.... something very COMICal I guess... If I can ILLUSTRATE my point a bit.. That there is a big reason I am not posting any stories lately....

:wink: Hint! Hint!
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Post by Lithorien » Wed Jul 04, 2007 2:22 pm

Mirage wrote:I just want to warn everyone on this board, that when the gallery is back....

Something great (well, I think it's great!) will appear.... something very COMICal I guess... If I can ILLUSTRATE my point a bit.. That there is a big reason I am not posting any stories lately....

:wink: Hint! Hint!
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Your point was quite DRAWN out, Mirage. I imagine it was PENCILed in quite a few minds' eyes' blanks. The foreSHADOWing of your statement POINTed us... ok, enough with the art/pencil puns. :P

Can't wait to see it though. :)

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Post by zerodin » Wed Jul 04, 2007 3:51 pm

Curse you Mirage and you're subtle riddles! It will take me a fort night to dechiper all of that!

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Post by crimsondragon1982 » Wed Jul 04, 2007 4:25 pm

I would like to take you up on that proof reading offer robotman. I'm sure you you and Kishin do a great job but since i have no writing talent and no artistic talent either, i would like to contribute to this board in some way.

You can send stuff that need to be proof read to crimsond@hotmail.com

I will do my best to have the best writing here.

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Post by Mirage » Wed Jul 04, 2007 6:10 pm

I might take you up on that, Crimsy! 8)

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Post by minkwheel » Wed Jul 04, 2007 6:45 pm

Gee, Mirage....I think I have an INKling of what your newest PANELS will be for the Gallery... I've enjoyed your work from PASTEL to present, and I think that OIL BRUSH by it when it's posted, and STROKE your ego--- Gotta make sure that these submissions stay SHARPIE. --minkwheel
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Post by sparty » Wed Jul 04, 2007 7:18 pm

stories are tough to write, ive tried my hand and I gotta say...god their awful lol. Maybe one day I will become talented enough like Mirage to write epic short stories

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Post by zerodin » Wed Jul 04, 2007 8:14 pm

minkwheel wrote:Gee, Mirage....I think I have an INKling of what your newest PANELS will be for the Gallery... I've enjoyed your work from PASTEL to present, and I think that OIL BRUSH by it when it's posted, and STROKE your ego--- Gotta make sure that these submissions stay SHARPIE. --minkwheel
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Post by crimsondragon1982 » Thu Jul 05, 2007 12:31 am

If people could send me a pm here if they want me to proof read a story after they send it, it would be appreciated. also once the proof reading is done, I will send it back to the owner so they can post it themselves and also read it to see how it looks to them. I will try to keep it as the writer wrote it.

P.S. I check my emails once every day or every 2 days so please give me few days to proof read. i will pm you and resend it once the proof read is done.

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Post by xerxes31415 » Thu Jul 05, 2007 10:39 am

I'd also like to throw my hat into the ring. I'd be willing to do proofreading of stories. Feel free to e-mail me with your story.

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Post by Stephaniebot » Thu Jul 05, 2007 12:56 pm

I'll be honest as everyone knows where my preferences lay anyway.
I'm happy to help proofread any human transformation type robot stories that may come along, though I can only do much at weekends.
Created robot stories arent really my scene though, so not really so keen to help out with those. I will if someone asks nicely, but dont expect them to rank high in my priorities.
I'm just a 'girl' who wants to become a fembot whats wrong with that?

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Post by xerxes31415 » Thu Jul 05, 2007 2:06 pm

Yeah, that's a good point to bring up. I'm totally open to proofread any type of story with any genders involved.

Also, I think this thread would be useful to authors, so I say it should be changed to a Sticky post (If Possible).

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Post by BA2 » Fri Jul 06, 2007 5:12 am

Hi,

I'd be delighted to proof read for anyone who thinks I could add anything from spelling & grammar to ideas and detail if required. Just pm me (T-G stuff not really my thing though).

I'd love to be writing myself and have ideas aplenty but it just takes so damned long to do them justice on the page that I can't find the time!

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Post by RancidInsanity » Fri Jul 06, 2007 9:06 pm

Hey I need some opinions. And I encourage you to be as brutally honest as you can possible be, Are my stories worth reading? Do you think they're good enough to "make the grade"?

and don't worry about hurting my feelings or anything. :wink:

Thanks.
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Post by noidguy » Sat Jul 07, 2007 9:50 am

I's a good speeler and even more betterer with the grammer, but I gonna leave the proofreeding to uthers.

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I'll be happy to proofread and critique anyone's stories.

Post by DrFranklin » Sun Jul 15, 2007 12:18 pm

hmm. shouldn't have hit return on the subject line.

send me the story to my FC mailbox if you want to proofread beforehand,
or notify me with a link after posting to the story section.

I can also be reached as

robospierre on Y! messenger

and

robospierre on IMVU 3d avatar messaging.

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Post by Brytestar » Sat Jan 05, 2008 10:19 pm

I'm starting to write more because I'm hoping for more RP oppourtunities myself. never got any feedback :(

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Post by gynoneko » Sun Nov 07, 2010 6:05 pm

How can we get our stories posted on the wiki site, and in the Story Archive? I have the ones I posted on here, and most people seem to like it, and I am writing others I hope to post here soon. I was hoping I could get them on the wiki as well.
Thanks!

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Post by gynoneko » Sun Nov 07, 2010 9:15 pm

You already gave me one last week ;)

I've tried to add mine now, but I'm not sure I did it all right. Can you please check and make sure I didn't mess anything up. Not sure I got the category in there, and it seems GynoNeko has no page either.

Thanks!

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Post by Karel » Thu Jun 14, 2012 6:21 pm

RancidInsanity wrote:Hey I need some opinions. And I encourage you to be as brutally honest as you can possible be, Are my stories worth reading? Do you think they're good enough to "make the grade"?

and don't worry about hurting my feelings or anything. :wink:

Thanks.
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Post by Fembotfan415 » Wed Oct 17, 2012 1:40 pm

Is there a board where you can post ideas for stories?

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Post by Fembotfan415 » Tue Oct 30, 2012 2:47 pm

some make a story about a malfunctioning tara strong for bronies like me

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Post by minkwheel » Wed Oct 31, 2012 12:21 am

Great Googly Moogly! --I've MET Tara! --she's extreeeeemly nice!!! (I know a lot of voiceover artists, because I'm a cartoonist) ---we're a close knit group. You have GOOD TASTE, my friend. --minkwheel.
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Post by DollSpace » Thu Nov 01, 2012 1:52 pm

gynoneko wrote:How can we get our stories posted on the wiki site, and in the Story Archive? I have the ones I posted on here, and most people seem to like it, and I am writing others I hope to post here soon. I was hoping I could get them on the wiki as well.
Thanks!
Hi, as moderator of the Story Archive, I apologise for not being on top of things... I moved twice and have had lots of malfunctions...and now I can barely get out of bed, so I'm sorry I've been way too slow putting stuff in the story archive. That, and the fact that I just lost my entire iMac, and with it, all the stories I assembled there, and word is still out on whether or not I can get them back. Putting stuff on the Wiki is the best solution now, but things may change. Oh, and Robotman, I need an account there, too, I think!

Thanks!

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Post by DollSpace » Thu Nov 01, 2012 1:54 pm

minkwheel wrote:Great Googly Moogly! --I've MET Tara! --she's extreeeeemly nice!!! (I know a lot of voiceover artists, because I'm a cartoonist) ---we're a close knit group. You have GOOD TASTE, my friend. --minkwheel.
That's awesome..I actually aspire to be a voice-over artist. I've already done some local advertisements and public service announcements. Once my iMac is fixed I also have to do some voicework for Fection, but until then, if you want to hear my voice, I have an MP3 of my PSA for a local charity I work for. :) And Tara seems like she'd be awesome. I'd also love to meet Cree Summer (who voiced Penny in "Inspector Gadget" and so many other characters in other franchises).

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