Law & Order SVU TNG - Cops Get Religion

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Law & Order SVU TNG - Cops Get Religion

Post by Baron » Wed Apr 25, 2007 5:29 am

"Lazy Maisie" made her haphazard way down towards her car in the vast shopping outlet's parking lot, when she was jumped by a worthless slug out for the first quick personal-fix of his day.

High noon was the perfect strike-time, in the mind of our antagonist. He'd been quite active recently, always striving to push the envelope under the cover of night, and he NEVER got caught!!! Lazy Maisie was his crowning glory - he'd give her the usual fuck-and-run {hey, she ALWAYS dressed like that, so she obviously deserves SOMETHING}, and proclaim himself a new God, for having done so in daylight for the first time AND remaining uncaught!!!

His joyously savage pounce on Maisie was THE last positive sensation he felt in this world; and when his manhood achieved full penetration, he was suddenly gifted with the "reward" for his violent attempts at self-gratification at the heedless expense of others. Far from being a mere target, Maisie was more accurately a new law-enforcement religion - of zero tolerance, fully incarnate at last.

Her female orifice the thug manged to violently enter did not shudder or throb - it sliced and diced the foreign object detected by her sensors, which stunned the aggressor for an important moment before the actual pain of his situation kicked in. The Rapist had been caught, tried, convicted, and sentenced in one fell swoop - and his pain was only beginning.

Looking up at his triumph-turned-nightmare, while trying not to see her short dress, boots and slightly damp complexion that turned him on so, he was nonetheless met with the last, worst, and most horrifying example about how his seemigly harmless "predilections" might come home to roost in a nasty way.

"I am Officer Hardgood-Day, and you are under arrest for rape, assaulting an officer.............." He was tuning out as she Mirandized him, but he sat up ramrod straight and really FELT something for the first time in many moons, when his captor bent down to kiss him - and then grasped her face and pulled it free, to reveal her true nature as a mere machine.

Albeit one devised under enough wisdom to overcome ALL obstacles in her path to justice, which was her true beauty. She wasn't designed by some committee; she was manufactured as a specific solution to a specific need. Period. And her entire design worked perfectly the first time out - raping a virigin was almost too obvious, but female robot Officer "Lazy-Maisie" Hardgood-Day proved how easy HER job could be, if given carte-blanche................

Outsmarted by an impossible DREAM???

Yep.

Blue-State Jurisdiction, after all - the Red side is for "others"......... :twisted:

DUM ~ DUM!!!!
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Post by Baron » Fri Apr 27, 2007 2:17 am

Thank you, my Friends. :oops:

This litle tale was one of those "stream-of-consciousness" ideas that strike at the oddest times. For once, I just sat down and let it flow un-impeded; the whole thing came out in about 30 minutes as I was logged in here a few days back, so it's totally "fresh-as-it-happened," if you will.

R-man, the gruesomeness was intentional - rape is no laughing matter, but the justice meted out to the perps in the "real world" IS a laughing matter. I wanted to at least give my fictional Lady the ultimate way to be able to fight back - a small way to help the {real} cause, in other words. Plus, I have to admit that Mirage's "Tarentino riff" style of writing has had an influence...... :wink:

Finally, yes Kishin, I WAS channeling the old pulp-fiction from the Swinging Sixties - with a little Joe Friday tossed in for good measure!!! Not my preferred "verbose" style, but I wanted the piece to be more about ITSELF rather than ME, so I simply stuck to a skeletal narrative mind-set, and just let the flow happen naturally. I'll proudly be celebrating a full decade as a member of this site {and all of Noid's previous versions, right back to the original Gynoid Gallery} come July, and this story is a small "thank you" contribution to this site AND the Community as a whole.

Everybody needs a good robo-fix now and then, after all.......... :mrgreen:
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Post by Baron » Wed May 02, 2007 1:48 am

GAH!!!

PLEASE don't get me started about the good ol' pulp writers, Kishin. I'm liable to blow the site's bandwidth about my admiration of everybody from Eando Binder to Phillip K......... {Yes, the great Mr. Dick "paid his dues" with a few early "brittle" pulp efforts, before finding his niche}.

Whatever happened to Hugo Loftig? As I recall, he had a 'thing' for mannequins / dolls-come-to-life, and was quite a {brief} rage in the first Playboy Mansion of the early 1960's........
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Re: Law & Order SVU TNG - Cops Get Religion

Post by Baron » Fri Jul 06, 2012 12:16 am

And a sexy hip-check {bump}, for my Dear, Sweet Maisie.
She was my first-ever original story heroine here at FC, and she's also one of the direct links between good old Minkwheel's zany worlds, and the equally offbeat environs inhabited by Inspektor 12 and his Family-Harem.

Yet another summer rerun for all and sundry to enjoy - please do!!
More to come............. :mrgreen:
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