A.S.F.R. words you find appealing

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Stories: Do you prefer Soft, Softcore, or Hardcore?

PG-13 soft
3
10%
R Softcore
7
23%
NC-17 Middle-Core
11
35%
X(XX....X) HARDCORE
10
32%
 
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A.S.F.R. words you find appealing

Post by dale coba » Sun Oct 13, 2002 8:35 pm

:twisted: I'm yet again trying to write my first stories, and this time I've made more progress than in previous attempts. While writing, I thought I might solicit some input in a simple enough way.

I certainly have learned a great deal about people's tastes, by reading and collecting most of the stories out there in the archives, over seven or eight years; but I would be interested to know:

What are the key words in stories which each of you would find most techno-sensually enticing?:wink:



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Post by 1024 » Mon Oct 14, 2002 8:50 am

"Malfunction"

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Post by Sega-boy » Mon Oct 14, 2002 4:46 pm

Malfunction is #1 in my book too.

Another good one is Overload.
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Post by Korby » Mon Oct 14, 2002 7:10 pm

Hmmm. Well, a random sampling off the top of my head...

robotic(s)
programmed
synthetic
artificial
malfunction
circuits
repair
maintenance
(dis)assembled
built
systems
component
interface
(de)activate

Just to choose a few at random, you know.

Oh, and I'll echo Kishin. Open panels=GOOD.

PS: Looking forward to seeing your stories. Any chance of a preview/excerpt, or are you not that far along yet?

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Post by dale coba » Mon Oct 14, 2002 9:52 pm

Korby wrote: PS: Looking forward to seeing your stories. Any chance of a preview/excerpt, or are you not that far along yet?
No, I couldn't show everyone a sample yet. Once every plot detail has been scripted, then I can go over the prose to make it serviceable.

So far, it looks to be some 16 chapters: each a unit of time which might warrant 3 or 4 pages. As the events described take place over the course of one night, I couldn't release them out of chronological order.

My stories might as well take place in Stepford. Those are the values I would hope to promote in an erotic story. Domestification, transformation into ideally content, ideally co-operative machines. My focus I think is on the variety of degrees of self-knowledge a cyborg/robot may possess. The possible characterizations are manifold; and limited, programmed self-knowledge can be terribly endearing to me.

Many readers, it seems, worry that :twisted: transformation stories :twisted: cross a certain line of acceptable taste :shock: ; I've grown out of that concern. I know what I want in my erotica cybernautica, and it doesn't have anything much to do with who I am outside of my secret desires. So I hope that people will give in to the fun :oops: , and not be put off :( by unsolicited transformations which underlie my offering, an alternative for what The Stepford Children could have been in the right hardcore hands.

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Post by Sega-boy » Mon Oct 14, 2002 11:47 pm

Interface! -Good one.

O.K. I know I'm forgetting some, but this is what I have compiled...

direction(s)
directive(s)
command(s)
function(s)
instruction(s)
parameter(s)
designation(s)
procedure(s)
objective(s)
operation(s)
level(s)
phase(s)
mode
status
loop
input
output
routine
error


load(ing)
upload(ing)
download(ing)
access(ing)
(re)program(ming)
(mal)function(ing)
(re or dis) engage (ing)
(re or dis) connect(ing)
upgrade(ing)
interface(ing)
transmit(ting)
receive(ing)
process(ing)
analyze(ing)
compute(ing)
calculate(ing)
detect(ing)
scan(ning)
experience(ing)
respond(ing)
initiate(ing)
(re)activate(ing)
commence(ing)
sequence(ing)
execute(ing)
assimilate(ing)
override(ing)
overload(ing)
short-circuit(ing)
(re)start(ing)
(re)boot(ing)
boot (up)
start (up)
begin
ready
run(ning)
prepare(ing)
resume(ing)
(re)store(ing)
(re)format(ting)
recharge(ing)
shut(ting)down
power(ing)down
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Post by Sega-boy » Mon Oct 14, 2002 11:49 pm

There's more.
Here's list 2....

electrical(ly)
mechanical(ly)
digital(ly)
robotic(ly)
automatic(ly)
precision
computerize
robotize
repair
maintenance
artificial
(dis)assembled
synthetic
bionic
cybernetic
analog


sensor(s)
system(s)
processor(s)
memory(bank)(s)
data(bank)(s)
file(s)
control(s)
switch(es)
button(s)
dial(s)
port(s)
slot(s)
component(s)
enhancement(s)
indicator(s)
circuit(board)(s)
(hard)drive(s)
(micro)chip(s)
chipset(s)
hardware
software
cable(s)
wire(s)
tube(s)
battery (pack)(s)
fuse(s)
panel(s)
vocal
matrix
CPU

robot(s)
fembot(s)
android(s)
gynoid(s)
droid(s)
duplicate(s)
replica(s)
bot(s)
automaton(s)
machine(s)
unit
robo-
mecha-
cyber-
auto-


satisfactory
successful
complete
normal
stable
functional
on-line
operative
compliant
adequate
efficient
imminent
critical
unstable
capacity
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Post by BethBot0101 » Sun Oct 20, 2002 12:34 am

Anything with Women becoming robotic, mechanical, or computerized (including digitalized).

That should be obvious from my writing....
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Post by BethBot0101 » Sun Oct 20, 2002 11:43 am

Kishin wrote:And what stories have you written? I'm not familiar with the name Bethbot.
How about "The Unknown"?
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Post by BethBot0101 » Sun Oct 20, 2002 12:36 pm

Kishin wrote:I was hoping that was you.

Good work. I'd love to see more of it. Your style suits my tastes.
I do have a couple around here that I could dig up by, "Tales of the Machine" has some gaps between tales that I have to get to fixing in the not released versions.

Meaning I have two tales but, I have to add a couple more for continuity so, it makes sense.

Assuming I can find them now. A while back I lost my Docs CD and was able to find an older version of the CD but, I don't know if that is on there. I'll check.

There is a standalone tale called "Chris the Fembot" which has nothing to do with the Tales of the Machine.

That one is more sentimental in writing.

I'm getting off topic aren't I? :-/
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