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Post by jpetoh » Tue Mar 09, 2004 4:14 pm

Cool. Keep it coming.
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Post by WilloWisp » Tue Mar 09, 2004 6:46 pm

If no one else is going to say it, I'll say it:

"I always knew Hollywood was full of plastic people."

Moving on, the story raises some interesting questions: Just how many droids are wandering around in that universe? Hopefully more.
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Post by DollSpace » Tue Mar 09, 2004 8:34 pm

Ooo ^^ this is good :) Can't wait for part II!

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Post by robotrof » Tue Mar 09, 2004 9:49 pm

great story. keep it up! :D
wheee!
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Post by botfriend2000 » Tue Mar 09, 2004 10:05 pm

:lol: Great story. Great fresh new plot line. Great new trwist. Great, great, great!!!!!!!! I lurke and don't post as often as I should. Keep up the GREAT work
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Post by htb21 » Wed Mar 10, 2004 12:18 am

wow excellent work! cant wait for the next installment!
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Post by tectile » Wed Mar 10, 2004 6:46 am

Hey, Look over there!
What's that I see?
Looks like a new star on the rise.

THis story has several things that are sometimes lacking in ASFR fiction.

The dialouge is natural sounding and believable.
A nice even flow to the narative.
Makes a totaly imposible fantasy sound like it actualy happened or could happen.

Well done my friend, Well done.
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Post by Bart » Wed Mar 10, 2004 2:41 pm

A very welcome surprise! :shock: Keep it coming.
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Post by sparty » Wed Mar 10, 2004 7:40 pm

And he has a pic with it...

Friggin A!
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Post by solo351 » Thu Mar 11, 2004 5:44 pm

This is some great work - a good story coupled with good picture
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