Subject/Object - Prologue + ch 1 WIP (Visual Novel)

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Subject/Object - Prologue + ch 1 WIP (Visual Novel)

Post by The Liar » Sat Feb 10, 2024 12:08 pm

So have the prologue and chapter 1 done for my visual novel Subject/Object (The prologue being a recreation of the comic of Re:Context), I think I worked out all the bugs, though if you find any please inform me.
Feedback, especially on the sound design, would be appreciated.

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https://mega.nz/file/Wv5RAZRB#mPToIlBQa ... UyvhAAUHhk
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Re: Subject/Object - Prologue + ch 1 WIP (Visual Novel)

Post by propagandaofthedeed » Sun Feb 11, 2024 11:37 am

This is next level.

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Re: Subject/Object - Prologue + ch 1 WIP (Visual Novel)

Post by Gorgo » Wed Feb 14, 2024 6:54 am

Nice of you to include more prosaic levels of interaction between Brigette and Duncan. Makes this better than just a sex-driven DSG.
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