AVANT_ROBOTICS_GRLFRND (Commission)

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AVANT_ROBOTICS_GRLFRND (Commission)

Post by DZiegler » Thu Oct 20, 2022 5:51 am

Hi there! I recently finished this really fun unique commission and had permission to share it with the community!

I'm going to link to the Google Drive document directly because of the very specific formatting structure I have assigned to the second part of the story (you'll see...). Definitely make it to the second part to see what I mean.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DVL ... sp=sharing

Anyways, I hope you enjoy! I really had fun with this dual-concept way of approaching a story and there may be more on the horizon.

As always, if you enjoy the story let me know!

Cheers,
DZ
Cheers!

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Post by Bane » Thu Oct 20, 2022 1:44 pm

You're really pumpin out stories left and right, and I'm loving them! The fembot's point of view was especially well done. I hope the story will continue!

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Post by botfriend2000 » Thu Oct 20, 2022 10:20 pm

Nicely done👍

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Post by robov » Fri Oct 21, 2022 1:48 pm

Really really need more of this story, so much potential here. Best beginning I’ve read in a long time

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Post by robov » Fri Oct 21, 2022 1:50 pm

Really really need more of this story, so much potential here. Best beginning I’ve read in a long time

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Post by Bears55 » Sun Oct 23, 2022 7:48 am

I love this approach to story telling ! Extremely well executed (pun intended)!

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Post by Extyr » Sun Oct 23, 2022 7:12 pm

Kinda sad that what he interprets as initiative is just a marketing program...

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Post by Bears55 » Mon Oct 24, 2022 11:32 pm

Extyr wrote: Sun Oct 23, 2022 7:12 pm Kinda sad that what he interprets as initiative is just a marketing program...
Although the same can be said about many human to human interactions, also…

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Post by Robo-Admirer » Sat Oct 14, 2023 4:08 pm

Still excited to see where this goes!

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Re: AVANT_ROBOTICS_GRLFRND (Commission)

Post by Condor621 » Mon Oct 16, 2023 7:42 pm

This is Gold, Jerry!! Gold!!

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Re: AVANT_ROBOTICS_GRLFRND (Commission)

Post by Condor621 » Tue Oct 17, 2023 11:04 am

DZiegler wrote: Thu Oct 20, 2022 5:51 am Hi there! I recently finished this really fun unique commission and had permission to share it with the community!

I'm going to link to the Google Drive document directly because of the very specific formatting structure I have assigned to the second part of the story (you'll see...). Definitely make it to the second part to see what I mean.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DVL ... sp=sharing

Anyways, I hope you enjoy! I really had fun with this dual-concept way of approaching a story and there may be more on the horizon.

As always, if you enjoy the story let me know!

Cheers,
DZ
Hey, let me know if it's cool to do a short on that... I know it's a commission, but you write the best tech dialogue I've seen, and I think I could do something cool with it.

Just checking before I put something out there... I may have already done one.. 😆

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Re: AVANT_ROBOTICS_GRLFRND (Commission)

Post by DZiegler » Tue Oct 17, 2023 3:40 pm

It’s fine with me as long as you call out and link the original work & author (myself) alongside your own post.

However, let me first verify with the commissioner as it’s technically their characters/idea/scenario.
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Post by DZiegler » Tue Oct 17, 2023 8:16 pm

Verified with commissioner. You’re good to go.
Cheers!

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Re: AVANT_ROBOTICS_GRLFRND (Commission)

Post by smalk » Thu Oct 19, 2023 8:11 am

Fantastic work!

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