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lmao train story :D

Post by mister_minations » Wed Mar 10, 2021 4:32 pm

Edit: 3.10/2021
As it turns out, revisions are important. An updated version is now available at the Wiki for people who feel like listening to a crazy person who still needs a teddy bear to sleep. Changes have been made to improve the overall flow and tone, as well as introducing improved formatting.
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Tongahs go down the long train track.

Tongahs has many time to think for thoughts. Tongahs has many thoughts he want to think about. Thinking thought make Tongahs feel happy, happy like Tongahs can being.

Tongahs feel sun on the track. Tongahs like the sun. The sun is bright, and the sun make Tongahs feel good weather.

Keep going forward, Tongahs keep his engine forward. Tongahs see lady on track. What lady doing on track? Tongahs know now not of nothing of no lady doing no nothing on track.

Tongahs call to lady.

"Choo-choo"

Tongahs is sad. Lady does not hear. Tongahs make call again.

"Choo-choo"

Tongahs feels sad increase. Tongahs doesn't like feeling the increase sad. Tongahs think that increase in sad feel unhappy.

"Choo-choo"

Tongahs move forward faster. Train track only goes in single direction, and Tongahs can't turn around. Tongahs does not want to turn around because Tongahs good train engine.

Tongahs good train engine indeed.

Good train engine don't turn around, and Tongahs is a good train engine indeed.



Katie tries to get up. Her eyes are heavy, and she can't quite seem to get control of her body. Eyes watering, limbs heaby, she makes an attempt to raise her body, only to fall back down in a heap.

As her senses slowly return, she hears something...something off in the distance. Something weird. It sounded like...a train whistle?

"Choo-choo"

"Choo-choo"

"Choo-choo"

She turns around, but there's nothing there. It must've been the wind or something. Yeah, it was nothing but the wind.

"Choo-choo"

A small beeping catches her attention. Looking down, she sees that her abdominal panel is open, displaying an error in her motor functions. Strange thing is, Katie just had her checkup a few hours ago. It was weird that her systems are acting up so soon.

Actually, now that she's had time to properly think, everything was kind of weird.

Where...where exactly is she?


Tongahs always is as Tongahs always is, and Tongahs is a very good engine.

Tongahs stay on tracks, and Tongahs does things a good engine does.

Now, Tongahs sees person on his track. Tongahs feel confusion because good people don't go on track. Track is only for good engine, and Tongahs is a very good engine indeed.

Tongahs knows that good engine keep tight schedule, and Tongahs is running behind.

Tongahs moves faster because Tongahs is a good engine, a very good engine indeed.


There's...there's a weird noise in the distance. Every time Katie tries to look, it suddenly goes away. She must be imagining things, stuck in the middle of nowhere, laying on some rusty train tracks.

She looks at her diagnostic.

Still stuck at 34%, it looks like.

She sighs. Her wireless connection wasn't working anyways. Getting comfortable, Katie takes in the atmosphere.

It was a pretty nice day.

Katie likes it when the sun is shining.


Tongahs is moving very fast, very fast now Tongahs is moving indeed.

Tongahs is running behind, and Tongahs doesn't want to be behind.

Good engines aren't supposed to fall behind, and Tongahs doesn't want to not be an engine that's not a good engine.

Good engines don't fall behind.

Tongahs is the most good of good engines, and Tongahs needs to go fast.


Katie sits up and frowns.

Her diagnostic was reading a respectable 64%, but there was....

There is definitely a sound in the distance, but it's not a train whistle. She still thinks she can hear a train whistle, but that's not what her auditory sensors are registering. At first, she couldn't even understand what it was, but it sounded like...


Tongahs ask the conductor if Tongahs should stop. Tongahs see peron no want moving, and Tongahs no want to cause problem.

Good engines get permissions, and Tongahs is very good engine indeed.

A loud, hearty laugh sounds from Tongahs back.

"Forward, Tongahs! Go forward as fast as you can!"

Tongahs thinks to Tongahs self, and Tongahs ask question about peron on track.

"Faster, faster! No time for delay!"

Tongahs smile, big smile on Tongahs face, big smile of happy, good engine.

Loud trail of steam from behind as Tongahs moves closer.



It's like...it's like there's someone in the background, narrating something. Try as she might, Katie couldn't quite figure out where the sound was coming from. It sounded like it was coming from everywhere, just...everywhere at once.

If she didn't know any better, it might've even been coming from inside of her.

She'll look into it. Her diagnostic was reading 97%. She would have time to--

A pebble suddenly jumped.

Then another.

Then another.

Then another still.

Katie turned to look down the tracks.

Scrapper Man look at person on track, and Scrapper Man laugh in big Scrapper Man laugh.
Tongahs laugh too, as Scrapper Man makes his command.

"Scream, little girl! Scream as loud as you can!"

"No matter how loud, you'll never get off these tracks!"

"Scrapper Man likes his little game, and Scrapper Man might then send you back!"

And Tongahs laughed

And Tongahs laughed

And Tongahs laughed



First, there was nothing.

Then, there was this thing.

A twisted thing, a mess of metal and piping made into a train. It smiled at her, a gaping wound that stretched across its maw. Rows and rows of teeth lined the jaws, each a different size and color.

In its cabin, there was another thing, this one also smiling. It looked at her, and it smiled wider.


"Scream, scream!"

Tongahs drove even faster.



She couldn't move.

She couldn't get away.

The more she tried to move, the more she stayed in place.

Her diagnostic was finished, but it was just spitting out static and garbled text. All throughout the corrupted data, she could see that thing in the train, still laughing at her. Still laughing, and still making those horrible faces...

Tongahs could hear the track person screaming.

Tongahs felt sad for track person. Track person scream too smalls. Track person need bigger screams for Scrapper Man.

"SCREAM! SCREAM"!


Katie kept screaming.

Katie could only scream.

She could see the train thing clearly now.

It wasn't smiling.
It wasn't even happy.
It was screaming.

The thing in the cabin was looking at her, grinning far wider than its own face. She could somehow tell she had made it unhappy. She could feel its mad, sickening gaze upon her.

She could feel it, the sheer malice, the sheer gleeful insanity.

But...

She couldn't move.

All she could do was watch it.
And it was getting closer...
And closer...
And closer...
And closer...
...
...
...

SCRappER MaN COmeS
ScrAPPEr maN TAKes
tonGAHS neEDs a BrANd nEW faCE


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Re: lmao train story :D

Post by mister_minations » Wed Mar 10, 2021 4:41 pm

Yes, this is my attempt at horror. No, it was not intended as horror. I just wanted to make a meme about Thomas the Train Engine, and then this happened.

Yes, this story only went through one revision.

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