Trendsetting (Comic) Part 3

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Trendsetting (Comic) Part 3

Post by The Liar » Tue Nov 17, 2020 10:43 am

Not sure if I should do an epilogue, or just leave it a this.

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Re: Trendsetting (Comic) Part 3

Post by The Liar » Sun Nov 22, 2020 9:12 am

Fishing for some feedback here, I was a little on the mentally and emotionally exhausted side when doing this installment; so I'd like to ask if I managed to convey things in a manner so that it all made sense in the end?
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Re: Trendsetting (Comic) Part 3

Post by dingdongdug » Sun Nov 22, 2020 2:39 pm

Hi , Of course yes but since some time , feedback became very uncommon on fembot central and sometime it's demotivating
But , your works are very nice and please don't give up

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Re: Trendsetting (Comic) Part 3

Post by Extyr » Sun Nov 22, 2020 4:11 pm

I like how there was some foreshadowing with the class 5 bodies being made illegal. All in all, I liked the story. I think you're one of the best writers here to describe the mentality of a subservient robot. You obviously put a lot of thoughts into that.

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