Folks,
I just posted Chapter 4 over at the wiki: https://www.fembotwiki.com/index.php?ti ... ens_Hunter
I hope you folks like it and as always feedback is appreciated.
PInebarrens Hunter Update
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Re: PInebarrens Hunter Update
Great stuff!
I like the technical differences between the two main Fembots - one reprogrammable, one not but both with distinct personalities. Also good to see the bots functioning as designed without breakdowns or interventions; you do well in putting across their robotic nature without resorting to ‘hot failure’ which is testament to your quality writing. While I love malfunctions and reprogramming, having the girls working properly for now sustains the story, builds character and engages the reader without sacrificing sexy robotness... Any future jeopardy will be the more engaging as a result.
I look forward to seeing where you take things...
I like the technical differences between the two main Fembots - one reprogrammable, one not but both with distinct personalities. Also good to see the bots functioning as designed without breakdowns or interventions; you do well in putting across their robotic nature without resorting to ‘hot failure’ which is testament to your quality writing. While I love malfunctions and reprogramming, having the girls working properly for now sustains the story, builds character and engages the reader without sacrificing sexy robotness... Any future jeopardy will be the more engaging as a result.
I look forward to seeing where you take things...
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