Something Borrowed - Something Blew

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Something Borrowed - Something Blew

Post by lightdarkdragon » Mon May 25, 2020 8:17 am

Hi! Something I wrote a bit ago. I'm linking to it in Google Docs primarily because it uses some of the features in Docs to create character differentiation (it does POV swapping). I hope that's alright!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dWa ... sp=sharing

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Re: Something Borrowed - Something Blew

Post by BA2 » Mon May 25, 2020 10:36 am

Great story, I loved the interior monologue.

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Re: Something Borrowed - Something Blew

Post by ANNA » Thu May 28, 2020 8:02 am

The bot POV was pretty brilliant. Would have been nice to have had the interaction between the two go longer. Even show a moment where the bots disillusioned programming thinks it has the upper hand.

Anyway you are very talented, thank you for the post.

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