Coming of Age - Riley's Story

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Coming of Age - Riley's Story

Post by NatalieBayer » Sun Mar 29, 2020 1:46 pm

Howdy folks!

So, I wanted to put a little disclaimer on this story, just so you dont get in to it and end up hating things. I just want to give everyone a heads up. So, these stories contain:

Young (but still at least 18 years of age) Robots and human characters.
Damage
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homosexual acts

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Re: Coming of Age - Riley's Story

Post by User1222 » Mon Mar 30, 2020 3:17 am

Wow! As long as this is, I couldn't help but wish for more!!

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Post by NatalieBayer » Mon Mar 30, 2020 5:27 am

Dont worry, there will be more...trust me
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Re: Coming of Age - Riley's Story

Post by General » Mon Mar 30, 2020 10:12 am

I have to jump in and say that I really enjoyed this story. It was a longer story but I couldn't put it down without finishing it.

I really liked the shift of perspective between the various characters which gave some good insight into their perspectives and motivations. It helped flesh them all out as individuals and not just cardboard cutouts.

Also the one attached image was a fun treat.

I look forward to seeing more with either these characters or others within the same shared universe.

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Re: Coming of Age - Riley's Story

Post by NatalieBayer » Mon Mar 30, 2020 10:39 am

Theres definitely more to come. Even if im not commissioned for it i kind of fell in love with these characters along the way and I would be delighted to just keep writing.

So stay tuned. More is on its way!
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Re: Coming of Age - Riley's Story

Post by Devil » Mon Mar 30, 2020 11:28 am

Excellent story Evil_Boo. Can't wait to read more!

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Post by User1222 » Mon Mar 30, 2020 5:29 pm

evil_boo wrote: Mon Mar 30, 2020 10:39 am Theres definitely more to come. Even if im not commissioned for it i kind of fell in love with these characters along the way and I would be delighted to just keep writing.

So stay tuned. More is on its way!
I think we all did, so it's great to hear there will be more. Though I admit, I was kinda expecting Michael to be a sleeper. 😮

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Re: Coming of Age - Riley's Story

Post by NatalieBayer » Mon Mar 30, 2020 6:33 pm

Mmmmmmaybe he is. Who knows...youll just have to read the next installment
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Re: Coming of Age - Riley's Story

Post by User1222 » Mon Mar 30, 2020 6:35 pm

evil_boo wrote: Mon Mar 30, 2020 6:33 pm Mmmmmmaybe he is. Who knows...youll just have to read the next installment
Can't wait!!

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Re: Coming of Age - Riley's Story

Post by BA2 » Tue Mar 31, 2020 1:46 am

Outstanding story, great writing!

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Re: Coming of Age - Riley's Story

Post by NatalieBayer » Tue Mar 31, 2020 1:39 pm

Thanks!
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Re: Coming of Age - Riley's Story

Post by DollSpace » Wed Apr 01, 2020 3:33 pm

Wow, that was outstanding... I really enjoyed that! I look forward to more, most definitely! Makes me want to finish my own Rylie story ("Phantom Doll", for those wondering)...I have a huge outline written somewhere but I need to find out where it is. Anyway, fantastic job!

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Re: Coming of Age - Riley's Story

Post by NatalieBayer » Wed Apr 01, 2020 4:23 pm

Thanks DollSpace! Ive always been an admirer of your work and you were a lot of the inspiration behind why i started writing to begin with...so thays high praise!
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