Finding Yourself - Finale (comic)

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Finding Yourself - Finale (comic)

Post by The Liar » Wed Feb 05, 2020 2:06 pm

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Re: Finding Yourself - Finale (comic)

Post by zerodin » Wed Feb 05, 2020 11:27 pm

I didn't really feel this series, storywise.
Your designs are getting more ambitious though.
One piece critique I'd offer is maybe dial the facial expressions back a bit, if the software allows.

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Re: Finding Yourself - Finale (comic)

Post by D.Olivaw » Thu Feb 06, 2020 7:35 pm

Contrarily, I really liked the psychological exploration in this piece, both of the fembot and the human, and thought you deftly wove together that element with the erotic content to produce a satisfying story, or at least one I was more intrigued by than your previous outings.
"Men, said the Devil,
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Re: Finding Yourself - Finale (comic)

Post by The Liar » Fri Feb 07, 2020 7:23 am

Thank you both, all feedback is appreciated.
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Re: Finding Yourself - Finale (comic)

Post by sfreader » Sun Feb 23, 2020 8:34 am

Found the story involving.

As for Xavier, he never deserved her anyway.

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