Lina, Part 1

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Re: Lina, Part 1

Post by DollSpace » Fri Oct 04, 2019 7:16 pm

Extyr wrote: ↑Fri Oct 04, 2019 2:17 pm It was promising, but glossing over the main sex part felt cheap. We are on a robosmut site after all. I lost interest after this point.
Not all stories offer it explicitly, some leave it to the imagination. Also, some people, me included, are a bit uncomfortable writing out just smut scenes. When I was more actively writing I tried to cover that up by writing in malfunctions and other erotic things that didn't always involve fucking or things like that, but everyone has their own preferences, I suppose. I mean, where else could you read a decent sci-fi story that has some sexual kinks in it but is primarily just good read that has scenes that would make people of the ASFR persuasion have a fun time imagining them? Imagine if this was in a 3D medium like TV; cast a hot actress as Lina and someone she has chemistry with as Matt and people wouldn't be able to get enough! ;) Besides, sometimes people are just bad writing sex scenes but excellent at writing in general, so you're getting into a world with robots and all and then suddenly kicked straight out by a really, really awkward "sex" scene. I'd rather let my mind imagine it my way so I'm sure to get wet if I choose to activate that part of my programming. :)

And can someone tell me what the heck this icon means? :timeout:

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Re: Lina, Part 1

Post by Robo-Admirer » Sat Oct 05, 2019 12:55 am

Dollspace , cause idk how to quote in mobile.
Pretty sure that's a "yo something ain't right here mate. Time out for a sec πŸ˜†
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Re: Lina, Part 1

Post by liliwinnt6 » Sat Oct 12, 2019 6:26 pm

Robo-Admirer wrote: ↑Sat Oct 05, 2019 12:55 am Dollspace , cause idk how to quote in mobile.
Pretty sure that's a "yo something ain't right here mate. Time out for a sec πŸ˜†
there's a quotation mark icon on everyone's reply, press that
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Re: Lina, Part 1

Post by Brytestar » Sun Oct 27, 2019 12:09 am

:D I like the first two photos
Sometimes you just gotta look at the Bryte side!

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Re: Lina, Part 1

Post by LongTimeLurker » Sun Oct 27, 2019 11:03 am

DollSpace wrote: ↑Fri Oct 04, 2019 7:16 pmNot all stories offer it explicitly, some leave it to the imagination.
Note to pile on Extyr (I love your thicc-bots!) but I just wanted to quote this. Duke's narratives are never that explicit, and I'm glad he brings his own brand of narrative to the site.

Always looking forward to more!

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