English Not Your First Language? Ask For A Proofreader!
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Re: English Not Your First Language? Ask For A Proofreader!
ohhhh what a nice thread !
is somebody willing to help me with that story ?
viewtopic.php?f=4&t=15164
I do my best, but there is still grammar mistakes !
is somebody willing to help me with that story ?
viewtopic.php?f=4&t=15164
I do my best, but there is still grammar mistakes !
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I'll review it for you! PM me and we can discuss further. I really love that story and would love to give it some extra polish.Kube² wrote: ↑Tue Nov 12, 2019 8:56 am ohhhh what a nice thread !
is somebody willing to help me with that story ?
viewtopic.php?f=4&t=15164
I do my best, but there is still grammar mistakes !
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can someone please proof read my story? Putting in a request for someone to proof read it soon.
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I'll take a crack at it tonight.
Check out my stories: https://www.fembotwiki.com/index.php?title=User:Spaz
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Been a while since I've been around.
English is my first language (and unfortunately only language), but after reading the first two parts of my terminator story I am not so sure I can really say I am a native English writer. Non-sequitur sentences, missing words, run-on sentences etc. it was pretty hard to read.
I was wondering if someone would be willing to proofread and provide feedback on (what I currently have) of part 3. Its about 6500 words as of now.
Cheers
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English is my first language (and unfortunately only language), but after reading the first two parts of my terminator story I am not so sure I can really say I am a native English writer. Non-sequitur sentences, missing words, run-on sentences etc. it was pretty hard to read.
I was wondering if someone would be willing to proofread and provide feedback on (what I currently have) of part 3. Its about 6500 words as of now.
Cheers
-Thing
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Was your terminator story the one where an avatar of skynet kept a man on a small villa Pavlovian training him? cause that story was kickass.TheThingBelow wrote: ↑Tue Oct 06, 2020 5:11 am Been a while since I've been around.
English is my first language (and unfortunately only language), but after reading the first two parts of my terminator story I am not so sure I can really say I am a native English writer. Non-sequitur sentences, missing words, run-on sentences etc. it was pretty hard to read.
I was wondering if someone would be willing to proofread and provide feedback on (what I currently have) of part 3. Its about 6500 words as of now.
Cheers
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No, you're wrong Battery. It's the one we had in spring where a female terminator brings a guy to a motel room to protect him, but she is emotionless and they have sex. Then he messes up with her infiltration protocol and ends up using her electric gun on her. I loved it, so I'm happy it's getting another chapter.
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I'm looking for a proof reader for a story that'll be coming mid next monthish. It'll be around 12K for reference and I've got a good deal written down already. Please PM me if you're interested.
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Hello
After years of reading you, I've been having a lot of fun with Chat GPT lately and have a few stories I'd like to share. As I am not a native English speaker, I would like to submit what I obtained to someone who could possibly correct the bad formulations.
Thank you all
After years of reading you, I've been having a lot of fun with Chat GPT lately and have a few stories I'd like to share. As I am not a native English speaker, I would like to submit what I obtained to someone who could possibly correct the bad formulations.
Thank you all
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Hello
I'm looking for a proofreader for my story. It's about conversion of student girl and called "Project Ino". And it's quite long, about 46-47k words.
This story Chapters 1-3 draft has already been posted recently by my friend SergioPerez11 on FembotLabs / RoboticWomans on DA.
He drew the main character of the story, which gave me the initial idea for the whole story, and later drew some more scenes.
Please PM me if you are interested.
I'm looking for a proofreader for my story. It's about conversion of student girl and called "Project Ino". And it's quite long, about 46-47k words.
This story Chapters 1-3 draft has already been posted recently by my friend SergioPerez11 on FembotLabs / RoboticWomans on DA.
He drew the main character of the story, which gave me the initial idea for the whole story, and later drew some more scenes.
Please PM me if you are interested.
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