COMPLETED 3DS comic, by Mirage

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COMPLETED 3DS comic, by Mirage

Post by Mirage » Wed Jul 11, 2012 2:13 pm

Well, as I did a few sketches on my 3DS, sitting on the toilet at work (L), I realise that simply drawing without the story frame in mind, is quite hard for me. So, I decided, I'll draw a new comic book on my 3DS. (don't worry, I'll continue the other story I started.). Hope you enjoy this!
Please note, not all were drawn will I was in the washroom! (L)

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Re: 3DS comic, by Mirage

Post by Mirage » Wed Jul 11, 2012 2:16 pm

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Re: 3DS comic, by Mirage

Post by Mirage » Wed Jul 11, 2012 3:03 pm

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Re: 3DS comic, by Mirage

Post by DollSpace » Wed Jul 11, 2012 4:56 pm

I'm not sure how I feel about this...there are parts that are eerily similar to my own life, and there are parts that just chill me, like "You belong to me; I created you!". That being said, the emotions come through even in the quick sketches and makes me have a few questions that I can't think of right now, except for "why did she cut herself?" She said "to see if I could bleed; to see if I was real", but what led to that suspicion? There's a lot that can be elaborated on here! :)

Keep up the good work :)

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Re: 3DS comic, by Mirage

Post by Mirage » Fri Jul 13, 2012 2:29 pm

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Re: 3DS comic, by Mirage

Post by Mirage » Fri Jul 13, 2012 2:31 pm

I hope you guys are liking this one, I won't deny it, I am having a hoot doing this one!

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Re: 3DS comic, by Mirage

Post by DollSpace » Fri Jul 13, 2012 2:39 pm

Oh man, that's emotional...it answers questions, too... I feel sad now, but it's a very engaging story. Maybe one day it'll be written out in short story form :)

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Re: 3DS comic, by Mirage

Post by Mirage » Fri Jul 13, 2012 3:39 pm

You might get terrified, instead of sad, in the near future... this story won't end on a happy note... but I think most of you guys knew this already! :wink:

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Re: 3DS comic, by Mirage

Post by Brytestar » Fri Jul 13, 2012 3:41 pm

<sigh>
Sometimes you just gotta look at the Bryte side!

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Re: 3DS comic, by Mirage

Post by DollSpace » Sat Jul 14, 2012 7:39 am

Brytestar wrote:<sigh>
Exactly.

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Re: 3DS comic, by Mirage

Post by Mirage » Sat Jul 14, 2012 9:29 am

so, should I do a super happy ending, with rainbows and unicorns, with Celine Dion doin a duet?

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Re: 3DS comic, by Mirage

Post by Mirage » Sat Jul 14, 2012 2:09 pm

Okay, the guy, is a secret superhero, that can talk to dead people, but suspect that aliens really killed his wife, but in reality, she was a water nymph, and mother Nature decided to kill her, because she escaped from a village, that was not a village at all, but a city, with evil elevators, with kids with tatoos in their forehead.


BAZING!!!!!!!!!


(did I miss one of his movies?)

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Re: 3DS comic, by Mirage

Post by DollSpace » Sat Jul 14, 2012 2:31 pm

You should end the story the way *you* want to, even if it's sad and doesn't make everyone happy. *BUT*, an at least vaguely happy ending *would* be cool to read... XD

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Post by Brytestar » Sat Jul 14, 2012 3:45 pm

<cry>
Sometimes you just gotta look at the Bryte side!

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Re: 3DS comic, by Mirage

Post by Mirage » Tue Jul 24, 2012 2:33 pm

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Post by Mirage » Tue Jul 24, 2012 2:56 pm

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Re: 3DS comic, by Mirage

Post by Mirage » Tue Jul 24, 2012 3:37 pm

Hope everyone liked it, it was a fun story to do on my 3DS. It is a bit choppy, since I added pages especially for here. It was fun combining SCIFY (gynoids) and Horror (spirits) together, my 2 favorite genres.

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Re: COMPLETED 3DS comic, by Mirage

Post by Devil » Tue Jul 24, 2012 8:14 pm

Very cool story Mirage. The ending kinda made a left turn. But I'm not complaining!

Keep up the good work.

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Re: COMPLETED 3DS comic, by Mirage

Post by Mirage » Thu Jul 26, 2012 3:11 pm

Thank you, Devil, at least 1 person liked it.... sight...

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Re: COMPLETED 3DS comic, by Mirage

Post by DollSpace » Thu Jul 26, 2012 3:47 pm

I liked it, too, but it was just so sad at the end... I'd love to see a continuation of this story, too! :)

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Re: COMPLETED 3DS comic, by Mirage

Post by Devil » Thu Jul 26, 2012 6:34 pm

Don't take the responses to heart. Look at the views for your thread. Over 600 so far and running!

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Re: COMPLETED 3DS comic, by Mirage

Post by code_author » Fri Jul 27, 2012 10:34 pm

Mirage,
Your work is always masterful. This art and story was excellent. The fact it was done on a ds, amazing. More people view and enjoy, then comment. (I know I'm usually one of them.)

Thanks.

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