A Gift Unwanted: Part 2

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Re: A Gift Unwanted: Part 2

Post by tectile » Wed Jun 06, 2012 7:00 am

Hoping to see more soon. You have my attention Sir.
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Re: A Gift Unwanted: Part 2

Post by confusitron! » Wed Jun 06, 2012 7:22 am

Great stuff, looking forward to the rest of it.
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Re: A Gift Unwanted: Part 2

Post by robolvr » Wed Jun 06, 2012 1:41 pm

Great stuff. Really looking forward to the transformation angle. Keep up the fantastic work.
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Re: A Gift Unwanted: Part 2

Post by darkbutflashy » Wed Jun 06, 2012 2:29 pm

The pacing is good. I'd say, it could be even slower. Don't let them come together too soon. :D
I'd wonder why it have to be five identical locks and how Jack managed the accurate measurement of the opening seam thickness. I couldn't tell apart a thickness of 3/4 from 1. :wink:
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