CyberFem Park: Random Scene 2

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Re: CyberFem Park: Random Scene 2

Post by liliwinnt6 » Wed Jun 06, 2012 3:40 am

Nice story, and it will have to continue.
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Re: CyberFem Park: Random Scene 2

Post by tectile » Wed Jun 06, 2012 7:33 am

I hope that whole "I don't have time for fun stuff anymore" situation changes and you continue the story. I'm liking it.

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Re: CyberFem Park: Random Scene 2

Post by Robjoe » Thu Jun 07, 2012 11:43 pm

I recognized Road Rash as soon as you described it despite never having played it myself--the concept is just that distinctive to me--though this line threw me:
“The numbers on the buttons correspond to the numbers on the screen that I had you memorize just now.” he said.
The only mainstream retro controller with numbered buttons that I can think of is the Sega Master System's, which labels its face-buttons as 1 and 2, and the Road Rash series wasn't even around at the time. =P

Anyway, great little quickie. Chantelle's malfunction was brief and well described (I happen to quite enjoy the idea of a less intelligent robot malfunctioning when trying to do something outside of her programming), and I appreciated the way you worked the game in without it feeling forced, awkward, or downright gimmicky. I guess I'm not the only one who finds the concept of a robot playing video games amusing!

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