Short script to be made over at stuckfast (hopefully)

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Short script to be made over at stuckfast (hopefully)

Post by fembotfan » Thu Jul 15, 2010 11:04 pm

Title: "Remote Possibilities"

Opening scene:
A lovely woman is sitting at a desk clicking and reading with a remote
control in her hand.
*voice over* I moved in with Kim (or whatever the name of the other
actress is we will use Kim for now) about three weeks ago. I found her
online where she was requesting female roommate in a nice part of
town. I was interested because the neighborhood was really nice, and
Kim was willing to pay the majority of the rent. the house has been
spotless, and Kim never seems to stay up late. The only problem is
that Kim has monopolized our office area. My laptop is on the fritz
and the only other computer in the apartment is in the office. Last
night and the night before Kim locked the door and would not answer it
no matter how persistently I knocked. In the morning when I woke up
she was already at work. Kim works at the University and teaches in
their Robotics department, very high tech stuff. I didn't have work
that day so I thought I would use the computer in the office. I found
something I never expected to find.
Kim Enters: "Greetings Amy, how are we feeling today?"
Amy: "Fantastic! look what I found"
Amy waves the remote control is the air, and Kim's eyes get big
Kim: where did you find that? That's not for you to play with!
Amy aims the remote at Kim, Kim puts up her hands saying "no don't"
Amy pushes a button and Kim freezes with a look of surprise on her face
Amy: I don't believe it, you really are a robot. Wow!
Camera pans over Amy's Frozen body, (it would be cool if she was in a
business skirt/suit).
Amy points the remote again at Kim and presses a button. "lets see if
we can get some secrets out of you"
Kim's eyes blink a few times but she keeps staring strait ahead and
her body stays frozen but her mouth closes and she begins to speak.
Kim: "well aren't you the curious one, well in this mode I can't lie
so tell me, what do you want to know?"
Amy: "I have seen your childhood photos all over this place, what is
up with that?"
Kim: "I haven't always been cybernetic, my doctoral thesis outlined
the process of converting a human being into an android"
Amy: "So you did it to yourself? Why?
Amy walks around Kim occasionally moving her a little.
Kim: "For the same reasons you chose to"
Amy: "What are you talking about? I am not a robot"
Kim: " You know I can't lie, not when I am in this mode"
Amy looks worried and ignoring Kim she points the remote at herself
and starts pressing buttons
Kim lifts one leg up, bends at the waist then stands rod strait with
her arms flat at her sides eyes closed.
Amy: "see this has no effect on me, I'm no robot"
Amy turns to look at Kim: "oh, oops did I turn you off? Lets turn you back on"
Amy again points the remote at Kim and presses a button, but Kim does not react
Amy: "lets try turning you all the way on"
The same action but Kim does not react, Amy looks over to the computer
and turns to walk to it, Kim's eyes snap open, and she reaches to her
watch and presses a button. Amy's feet freeze in place
Amy: "what is going on"
Kim: "I already told you, your a recently converted android"
Amy: "no look the remote doesn't do anything to me" she looks at the
remote and reaches to press the button but Kim quickly touches the
watch a second time Freezing Amy before she can push a button.
Kim: "that is quite enough of that, you should never have had my
remote, this is your remote here, on my wrist" Kim takes away the
remote from Amy.
Amy: staring strait frozen "but I'm not a robot, I'm not a robot, I'm
not a robot, I'm.. not.. a.. ro..bot"
Kim: "oh dear" she presses a button and Amy mechanically walks to the
computer arms flat at her sides, she bends at the waist and turns her
head to the side.
Kim: "Ok lets see if we can fix you."
Kim reaches behind Amy's head and the scene fades to black.

I am about $150.00 short of the necessary amount to have it made, but I absolutely loved "Upgrade" which was also made through Stuckfast.

My #1 choice for Kim is CINDA HUNTER (from Linger 21)

If you interested in helping at all please just shoot me a message.

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Post by crimsondragon1982 » Mon Jul 19, 2010 1:18 pm

it's too bad you can't find the Upgrade clip anymore. I always wanted to see it in its entirety

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Post by fembotfan » Fri Jul 23, 2010 3:53 pm

Yeah Upgrade was awesome, I have to say it is my favorite thus far.
The fellow over at Heroine Universe made a great video with a team of Fembot Super-heroines (custom movie) but he did not release it, because he did not like the quality of the audio, it was sweet. That is my second favorite, but I am the only person to have viewed it. :? If someone else asked to purchase it he might sell it, but I don't know.

At least the stuckfast / guytalon video will be open for my fellow ASFR'ians to see. I think it will be out next month, so keep your eyes open over at www.guytalon.com

Oh the script was improved upon, but there will be no nudity.

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No nudity = a sad Kishin

Post by fembotfan » Sun Jul 25, 2010 11:56 pm

Sorry Kishin, it was more than twice the money to have a "mature" video made through guytalon.

The one from http://www.heroineuniverse.com had nudity, fembots, heroines, reprogramming, sound effects and costumes. But he didn't release it to the public (breaking my heart). It had Christina Carter & Savannah Costello as the two heroines and both did a sweet job. It had lots of dialog but it was hot.
Anyway, I will see if I can post a screen capture or two from that in the near future.

The ones made before that by other companies (4 in total) were pretty much crap. Anyone that bought Wenona the robot or the "Sasha and Missy" videos knows how terribly bad a video can be.

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