Dyson Family Values Pt. 4

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Dyson Family Values Pt. 4

Post by petey » Sat May 30, 2009 10:44 pm

Thanks for all the kind comments. I do appreciate them. However I don't want to address some of them and accidentally give something away about the story. That, and I'm hoping the story itself will answer some of the comments. Remember to read part three before this

All the girls within 200 feet of accounts payable, and one or two of the guys, were clustered around Zoe’s desk. The backlog of invoices waiting for them on a Monday morning could wait a little longer while everyone oohed and aahed at the engagement ring being flashed around. Zoe felt a little embarrassed at all the attention, but once she showed Gretchen the ring, everyone wanted to look and congratulate Zoe.
“It was so sweet, he took me to the coffee shop where we had our first semi-date and he bought me one of those stick-shaped cookies. When I pulled it out of the bag, it was sticking through the ring. Then he got down on one knee and proposed right there during the lunch rush. People started applauding, it was so surreal. Then we found out the ring was too small. I just got it back from the jeweler this morning.”
There were a few ‘awww’s, but the (unspoken) consensus was that it was kind of corny. Dana was just excited that there was a gift-wrapped excuse to take Zoe out for a night on the town.
“So, tell us about your future better half,” Christine chirped from behind two other people.
“Let’s see, his name is Neil. He works in the marketing department on the seventh floor. He has an MBA. He’s got one younger sister, and his mother runs a health spa. He’s a real sweetheart and he does this grinning thing that I just love...”
The android women in attendance all had the same idea. They checked the company employment roster, and sorted out for the marketing department. There was one guy named Neil.
Neil Dyson.
And his mother ran a health spa, according to Zoe.
The realization of why Dr. Dyson was so adamant about getting Zoe to become synthetic hit them at roughly the same time, and they could clearly see it on each others’ faces. This girl was going to be the daughter-in-law of Dr. Elaine Dyson, the woman who first hatched the idea of robotic women and thus the one responsible for the vast improvement in their lives.
Zoe had kept going on about Neil, but Dana interrupted, “Sorry Zoe, I need to take Katie, Christine and Ava away for a moment. Congratulations again. We’ll talk some more later.” Zoe acknowledged their departure and kept on going for a little while longer.
The four synthetic women went into Camilla’s empty office and shut the door. It took a moment for anyone to speak.
“Her fiancé is Dr. Dyson’s son?” It was actually less of a question than Katie made it sound like, and they had all come up with the same hypothesis anyway.
“It sure seems like it. Maybe he’s a nephew, but the file says he’s 24, so it’s almost certainly not a brother.” Christine was trying desperately to come up with an alternate conclusion based on what they knew.
“Nope, she said it was his mother that ran a health spa, so unless Dr. Dyson’s sister or sister-in-law runs another health spa, we’re dealing with her daughter-in-law,” Dana replied.
The task hadn’t really changed, but they all felt like the stakes were higher now. They were responsible for making a future member of Dr. Dyson’s family part of her larger family. And if they succeeded, one of the most important people in their lives would owe them a big favor. Sure, they had already been given so much, but the idea of having more is human nature.
“So where’s Camilla?”

Units VX9348 and UX1696 had each attached themselves to one of Dr. Dyson’s nipples and were using one of their hands to massage the pussy of the other naked unit. Elaine leaned back and luxuriated in the sensation. The firmware upgrade allowed her to process so much more information from her breasts now. She couldn’t tell if she was enjoying the tongues or the new data flow more, and figured that it didn’t really matter.
“Camilla, why don’t you work on my pussy for a little bit. Suki, there are some toys in the wooden chest, why don’t you pick some out?” Elaine smiled as the blonde office manager began planting kisses down her stomach. But even nicer was the sight of the tiny bundle of Japanese curves strutting naked around her office. Dr. Suki Narita was an expert in biomechanics and Dr. Dyson was sure she’d make a great addition to the research staff. But at the moment, the Japanese doctor was jiggling back to her western counterpart with two handfuls of wires and floppy dildos.
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“Let me see if I can guess what this one does.” Suki smiled as Elaine leaned back and squealed from the toe-curling orgasm Camilla had just induced. Dr. Narita opened up her paplexus panel, still amazed at the sight. She then slipped one of the sex toys into the available, exposed expansion slot. It was a rush to feel her software update automatically, and a further rush when she felt the air tickle the sensors on the toy. She quickly realized that the toy was a souped-up version of her artificial tongue, articulated and controllable by her thoughts.
Elaine had regained enough composure to address her new colleague, “Go ahead, I’ll bet VX9348 would love to feel that inside her wet, synthetic pussy.” Camilla was still dutifully lapping up Dr. Dyson’s copious juices, but heard enough to wiggle her ass at Suki.
And that was all the encouragement Suki needed. She crouched down to get the fake dick to the right level, and then flicked it up and down the length of Camilla’s slit. Elaine could feel the blonde shudder at the initial contact, but she didn’t stop licking. Then Suki moaned as she felt ‘her’ phallus slowly sink into Camilla’s gash. She wiggled and swirled it around inside her partner before beginning to thrust. Camilla felt like she was going to explode.
“Hi Mom,” Jessica walked in wearing the normal institute uniform. Oddly enough, the only person who didn’t turn to look was Dr. Dyson. Both Suki and Camilla felt like they had been caught in the act, and by what appeared to be Dr. Dyson’s daughter, no less.
“Oh don’t mind me; I just needed to have a quick chat with the doctor.” Jessica’s level of comfort with the situation didn’t increase Suki and Camilla’s. Jessica calmly sat down on a couch opposite the three women and examined one of the toys Suki had tossed aside.
“Girls, why don’t you attend to each other while I speak to Jessica. VX9348, I think that plan of yours needs work, so record our conversation for later playback” The other two units were unsure, but they were also really turned on. Camilla opened her audio options and began recording. Suki disengaged herself and Camilla turned around to embrace the other doctor. Dr. Narita could still taste Dr. Dyson’s sexual lubricant as they slowly fell to the carpet between the two redheads.
Elaine pulled her hair back behind her ears and crossed her legs, not bothering to cover up any more of her nudity. “So, how was the movie?”
Jessica shrugged, “Eh, it wasn’t too bad. We went to see this French film. Zoe didn’t want to see Second Foundation. She doesn’t like Science Fiction.”
“Not even Asimov?”
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“We’ll have to do something about that.”
“That’s what I said. Anyway, I’ve got images sent to fabrication, they’ll extrapolate her body without the blouse and we’ll be able to have the head and torso mockup ready whenever Neil tells her about the Institute.” Jessica licked the toy in her hand just a little bit to test it out.
Elaine raised an eyebrow, “Neil didn’t say anything to me about telling Zoe. In fact, he didn’t seem to want Zoe to ever be told about becoming a synthetic woman. He was quite adamant about it.”
“He doesn’t even want to give her the chance? That doesn’t sound like Neil.”
“Sweetie, you remember that phase he went through where he called us robo-whores and brainwashed hedonists.”
VX9348 screamed in ecstasy as UX1696’s thrusting finally hit pay dirt. Soon after, UX1696 had an orgasm of her own, her first that didn’t come from her pussy. The two of them switched positions, with UX1696 lying down and keeping her attachment straight while VX9348 impaled herself and began bobbing up and down. Jessica scooted over to see around the blonde robot.
“But we got past all that.”
Elaine gave her a sympathetic look, “He accepted that we’re his family, I don’t think he really understands how much better our lives are after becoming synthetic.”
Camilla shook wildly and collapsed upon the Japanese doctor. The phallus slipped out and flung a bit of fluid onto Jessica’s leg. The two units didn’t stop though, softly moaning as they began making out with one another.
Jessica sat there, not sure if she was hurt more by Neil lying to her or by Neil rejecting her synthetic womanhood. Elaine walked around the units fucking on the carpet and put an arm around her daughter.
“But we’re still going to give Zoe the opportunity to become an android. She deserves that, and so does Neil.”
“Won’t Neil be angry - I mean run-around-with-a-sledgehammer angry - if we do that?”
“He’ll see firsthand how much wives and husbands can improve their relationship. Faced with the truth, he might be embarrassed by his former stance, but he won’t be angry.”
Jessica wasn’t 100% sure about that logic, but she respected her mother’s judgment. Besides, the idea of hoisting Neil up on his own petard sounded pretty attractive right about now.
They chatted for a little while longer about Zoe specifically before Elaine stood up, “I’m going to have a discussion with the good Dr. Narita about android vaginal assemblies. If you’d like to work off some energy, I’m sure VX9348 here won’t mind.”
The other two units rolled away from one another and Elaine took her turn straddling the Japanese android. Jessica removed her uniform and briefly considered using the toy before tossing it aside and calling Camilla to the couch. The two of them got into a 69 position and began eagerly eating each other out, Jessica much more forcefully than the blonde.
Camilla had only been dimly aware of the conversation going around above her, but had heard the name Zoe a few times. Dr. Dyson had called her in to discuss the matter. But most of her system resources were devoted to exploring the young redhead’s snatch in front of her mouth. A priority text message from VX9319 appeared in her vision, and she had enough awareness to understand that.
“Zoe is Dr. D’s future daughter-in-law. Outing still planned. Advice?”
Part Five is after Part Four.
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Post by Baron » Sat May 30, 2009 11:27 pm

Kudos so far - good pacing, nice details, solid scenarios developing. Given all this, my personal take on what might happen further into the tale has already been formed. All I'll say now is that my conjecture came to me in Ch. 1. It will be interesting to see if said conjecture is right - my only wish is that any surprises are done in a fresh way, avoiding as many cliche`s as possible. :wink:

I'll echo what has already been said though - in this context, the "Dysonistas" do seem to be more than a little narcississtic....... Reminds me of at least two women I've been close to, sadly.
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Post by sparty » Sun May 31, 2009 12:08 am

This might be the newest epic for the forums - I sure hope there are some good twists - I don't want Zoe to be converted for the sake of Neil...odd....

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Post by inky 2 » Sun May 31, 2009 1:37 am

fist off STANDING APPLAUSE for these stories they are great but i agree with both mentioned topics ... i know ive been pretty vocal in this story series but there is alot of interesting point of views in this, DR Dyson doesn't seem to believe there is no better existence than a android... even though her son is very clear in his feelings... but i shall stop with that im super excited so see how this progresses i think it will be great i dont feel like making guesses

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Post by The Liar » Sun May 31, 2009 5:50 am

Kinda disturbing that they're talking about altering Zoe's personal tastes to accommodate their own.

Asimov was boring as hell anyway.
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Loving this...

Post by BA2 » Sun May 31, 2009 7:26 am

Great writing and a really good exploration of the uncomfortable but, for me, essential central paradox of the fembot: whatever Zoe wants or feels now she'll be overjoyed if she becomes an android and it'll be the best thing that ever happened to her.

Programmed satisfaction without the tedious business of preference; that's wrong.... right?

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Post by Otaru Mamiya » Sun May 31, 2009 12:49 pm

Very well written indeed. It's interesting to see these things from the point of view of someone who would choose not to have a robot wife, especially when he's surrounded by robots on a regular basis.

I'm liking how this story approaches the psychological aspects of these robots. The most likely subjects for conversion are the ones who are the least likely to be satisfied with their human lives. Neil does have a point that the perception of self-perfection (even a programmed perception) is narcissistic. Add to that the fact that these bots are constantly being arroused by an open panel and we have a line of self-obsessed, nymphomaniac robots. It sorta makes me wonder how they'd react to ordinary computer repair if the sight of circuitry turns them on that easily. I can understand why Neil would choose a the complexities and insecurities of a human.

Now if we could get that complexity programmed into a robot, it could be the most interesting Dyson-bot yet. :D Maybe Zoe would make a good robot after all. :twisted:
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Post by Adon » Sun May 31, 2009 3:50 pm

(/delurk)

It's always intetresting to see a darker take on something without turning anyone into a moustache-twirling villain. It's actually building on stuff that's been built on in other stories, and taking them to a logical conclusion. I mean, look at other Dyson stories. How often do we have them going on about how much they love being a robot, how much better off they are, how everything about fembots turns them on, and so on. Seen from the outside, it DOES seem narcissistic. And from their perspective, since it is naturally so much better, OF COURSE turning someone is doing them a favor.

Of course, you do have to wonder about 100% satisfaction, and how much of that satisfaction comes from them being programmed to be happy. Also, how matter-of-fact these ladies are about manipulating Zoe is kind of chilling.

I do think it would be a twist not often seen here, and one I would be satisfied with, if Neil doesn't 'come around'... and he really shouldn't. While his mom thinks he's doing both him and Zoe a big favor, she also needs to learn when it's time to butt out.

The really scary thing is that Dr. Dyson mostly seems to be doing this for herself. She knows how Neil feels, but didn't even hesitate to go on with this. Why? Partly for the stated reason... that she thinks that she's doing them a favor in her own extremely biased opinion. But partly it seems like she can't stand the idea of a female member of the family going unconverted -- even if they don't really have any need to be. "No daughter in law of MINE is going to be a fleshbag!"

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Post by Spaz » Sun May 31, 2009 4:15 pm

I think this Dr. Dyson is becoming exactly like the Borg Queen from Star Trek.

It seems that they all want nothing more than to be perfect, like the Borg, but they don't want to be themselves nor for anyone else to be either.
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Post by Korby » Mon Jun 01, 2009 1:11 am

I'll just say that it's gratifying to see this story generate some interesting and insightful commentary. Having been privileged to read it already, I knew that Petey had a good thing going, and I'm glad to see it provoke some reaction.

It speaks to Petey's ability as a writer that so many people are already deeply invested in the characters and what happens with them.

Keep reading--it might surprise you how it all pans out.

(Meanwhile, I'm sitting here becoming very aware that the bar has been raised in terms of the Dyson setting... I've never apologized for what I've written in the past, and I never will. What I've written in the Dyson universe has always been for my own enjoyment, and shared publicly in hopes that someone else out there might take that same, er, rather visceral level of enjoyment out of it. But I've never even tried to put even a tenth part as much depth into my stuff as Petey obviously has here.... and now I wonder if I can ever really go back to that same well with a clear writerly conscience....)

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Post by petey » Mon Jun 01, 2009 12:52 pm

Here's the thing, Korby. This story doesn't work as well without all the work you put into your stories. I can jump in without having to explain how Elaine and the other Dyson androids feel about themselves. Plus Elaine as a 'villain' is infinitely more interesting because it's such a short trip from how she's been written before. I could have written an extra something at the beginning that would introduce the Dyson Institute to the uninitiated, but it wouldn't work as well as having that library to fall back upon.

And despite what I produced, I enjoy those 'visceral' stories :) It'd be an absolute shame if I managed to discourage someone else by writing this story (and I think I may have done it to one other guy already :/ )

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Post by Mare_Vir » Mon Jun 01, 2009 1:19 pm

An author's writing should never discourage anyone from writing, but a high quality story like this one should certianly encourge anyone else to write better.

I love this story universe, and it wouldn't be a shadow of what it is without Korby's efforts, and for that, everyone who's enjoying this story should thank him. I sure appreciate it.

I still don't see Dr. Dyson as as big of a villianess as others have, She's a dutiful mother who wants the best for her son, which is, of course a wife who's JUST like her. Combining that earnest desire with the perception of android perfection is a dangerous concoction.

I think, given Neil's feelings on the subject, encouraging Zoe to roleplay a robot master relationship could backfire, but we'll see.

Finally, I am really enjoying the posting of the story in serial fashion. I'm excited to see that there's a new post. Now I see why publishing a work in this manner worked so well for Dickens.

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