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[Mirage]

Well, I'll be posting the pages on DiviantArt since the gallery is still down. If someone wants to post them here direclty, please do so. (the collector...Hint.)

I'll put only "mature" block when needed (to see them, simply join DeviartArt, takes five seconds).

I want to thank CodeAuthor to be my proof reader and Robotman for all the help too

Also, I figured a way to had the text somewhat easily. But this way, the comic almost doudled in size. Somehow, this is good news because it will stretch it for people who want to read it on a long run.

I'll do my best to post a few pages by week...

This comic took me around 3-4 months to draw and typed, lots of work when on it.

THE ONLY THING I DEMAND IN RETURN, is COMMENTS...

Good or bad, questions... anything..

Nothing kills more the thrill of posting something and barely getting any responces...

I knows this community is sooo secretive or silent many time..

But, I know it can also be a funny and cool one too!

Remember who's posting here. Mirage, Mister Nutso! (L)

Oh, and one last thing, please take the time to look at the art too.
You have to realised I didn't barely drew in the last 5 years...
I won't lie, this comic gave me something I lost for the longest time..
The taste to draw again... even it's the most sexual thing I ever drew
in my life, I am proud of it...

Also, you will notice like I now see that my art really improved over the start of the comic to the end...

So, anyway, thank you and hope you like it...

Mirage


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http://mirageot.deviantart.com/art/Page-1-63105320

http://mirageot.deviantart.com/art/Page-2-63106811

http://mirageot.deviantart.com/art/Page-3-63108300

http://mirageot.deviantart.com/art/Page-4-63108425

http://mirageot.deviantart.com/art/Page-5-63108575

http://mirageot.deviantart.com/art/Page-6-63108760

http://mirageot.deviantart.com/art/Page-7-63108894

http://mirageot.deviantart.com/art/Page-8-63109080

http://mirageot.deviantart.com/art/Page-9-63109258
(mature content!!!!!!!!!!!)

[Mirage]

Should I post the comic directly here? (maybe in the pictures folder instead that Stories..
( I just figured out Photobucket out..am I limited by how many pics I can post?)

Just wondering...

Mirage

[Nathan]

I think it's a good start, thou i noticed alot of issues, mainly perspective and skeleton structure problems. I'm aware it takes time to get very good, i should know. Also try to "tigthen up" your pencils, shading is nice in the preview stuff, but too much can ruin the effect your going for. When drawing hair, you should't try to draw every single strain of hair. there are ways to render hair without making it look like a soild shape of mass on her head. It looks less sketchy and would probably benefit your need to improve yourself artwise. Also trying looking at other comics at shops and even some manga books (barnes and nobles is your friend). I'll probably take a crack about blasting you, but trust me i'm being lite compare to the ass chewing i got from a comic editor. Although that repaor page u post, is that a single scene or is there more stringed together. Honestly more could be done for it. me thinks i'll take a crack at it.

Nathan~

[L.W.]

Cool so far, glad to see you drawing again

[dieur]

Knowing Mirage, this can't be as simple as him picking up a robot maid and two-timing with it. What ill or strange awaits??

[DollSpace]

Just checking in to say that I haven't yet had time to go through your comic but I eagerly look forward to doing so. I always love your work and can't wait to see what you've come up with! I'm still not sure how to integrate this into the story archive, though, so any suggestions from anyone would be helpful!

Thanks, and keep up the good work!
Catie