Summer Break

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Summer Break

Post by Uncom » Sun May 26, 2024 5:33 am

Hey everyone, after ages of trying to come up with a written story and after some revisions, I've finally managed to put one together.

Feedback would be appreciated, hope you enjoy:

https://www.fembotwiki.com/index.php?title=Summer_Break

CW: Step-family incest.

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Re: Summer Break

Post by Svengli » Tue May 28, 2024 1:11 pm

I liked it. Thanks for writing. I'll read it in more detail later.

It could use a bit of editing for proper word use but the basic scenario is nice and I personally prefer Stepfordian/limited-free-will stories so it's good to see one.

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Re: Summer Break

Post by sqr149 » Fri May 31, 2024 10:14 pm

Step-family incest is not usually my favorite category, but this story was good. I always like when authors take the time to make illustrations of their characters. It helps bring the story to life more in my opinion.

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